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Date gone wrong

It was June, 19, year 2019. Yen Zing felt himself falling into an endless void, watching his body fall to the ground. let's backtrack.

Hasen just woke up, it was a rainy day, and he could feel something, like eyes watching him. He looked around, but seeing nothing in his room, thought nothing of it.

In fact, Yen was more worried about today, as he was supposed to go on a date with Que Ming, a girl he had been wanting to go out with when he first saw her in the hallway when he was going back home after a tiring day at College.

She was not the most beautiful girl ever, but she was perfect in Yen's eyes. He especially liked her eyes, they were a deep Ruby, glittering like their namesake.

In fact, he wasn't really sure he was going to ask her when he did, as her family was very prominent in the city. He was walking and typing to hype himself up to ask her, when he ran into her in front of the math room. He then thought" Fuck it, if I can't ask her now, I'll never ask her ever." he then quickly apologized to her. she was blushing, and said "No no, it was my fault, I wasn't paying attention to where I was going."

Yen then grabbed his thoughts together, and said "you know, I was just looking at movies to watch at the Theatre later, and I saw a pretty good one. I was wondering if you were free tomorrow?"

She nodded her head and replied "Yeah I am free, I guess I could meet you at the Theatre or?"

Yen responded hastily, "Uh would it be more convenient for me to pick you up before going? It would be no trouble for me."

She smiled and said" Sure, I'll be waiting outside my house at 12, cya then." And walked in the direction of her appartment.

Back to the present dilemma, Yen had slept in, and it was already 11:40, he would have to rush to be able to get into his car and get to her house. Luckily she lived really close by, the second apartment complex right next to his. He ran and jumped down the first floor staircase, and jumped and revved up his car. He barely arrived in front of her apartment, and straightened out his t-shirt and pants, and went in front of his car, and she just opened the door of her apartment. Yen let out a small sigh and went to greet her.

He opened his car door and she went in. He admired her curves as she went into the car. He then closed the door and started the car. They drove on and were talking about college and which classes they enjoyed and disliked. Before they knew it, they were at the Theatre.

Yen went and bought the tickets, and he walked with Que to buy a large popcorn and drink. They then proceeded to go into the Theatre. Suddenly, a guy dressed in dark jeans and a black sweatshirt grabbed Que's purse and slapped her ass. He dashed quickly to the stairwell leading to the second floor of the Theatre.

Yen was shocked, and Que was blushing furiously, and her face was filled with rage. Haen proceeded to run after the thief. He was quickly gaining on him, and soon the thief pushed the door open on the roof, as he couldn't stop on the second floor otherwise it would have given Haen enough time to catch up to him. Yen then burst through the door after him and fond the thief on the edge of the roof. Yen was a little anxious, as the thief was looking as though he was going to fall. Yen called out" yo dude, just back away from the ledge, the purse isn't worth it, we can talk this out." in his head though, he was thinking that as soon as the guy backed away, he was gonna deck this guy for slapping Que's ass. But the thief seemed to have an inclenation, and sprinted towards Yen, and slammed into him, and continued running. Haen was shocked, and quickly tried to twist around to avoid falling. He stared at the thief and as he felt himself falling down off the roof, he saw the hood fall off the thief's head, and he saw the most beautiful face he has ever seen, striking violet eyes and beautiful ivory colored hair flowed past her shoulders. Haen's mouth was agape, not understanding why this drop dead gorgeous lady was killing herself to bring him into the grave aswell. But suddenly, she vanished into thin air with a little smile, and Yen's head hit the ground, and he knew no more.

Ah, well in the comment section, tell me what I did well, I'll try to update 2 times a day, as it's summer time so I'll try and send them out. This was done really quickly, and on my phone, all I can say is I'll try and improve the quality going further into this. also thx for checking this story out.

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