ShadowChaos
i lake the way it started you rock author san update more like this and it will be more exciting and dont fall mc into dark like orginal mc of overlord just be good as a seraphim i hope more chapter coming [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I really like the chapters so far, the writing quality is great compared to other stories, you incorporate lore into the sorry as he speaks to give a clear understanding of what's going on, character design ehh. But I do have some question if you could answer them author of possible. Q) Is Ainz Ooal Gown ( The guild ) and Manon still a thing in this fan-fic and will we meet them later?
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Honestly I love. The MC knows Momonga so it will be exciting to see those two meet up. Also the MC should be honest but not naive and innocent, he's a seraphim not a child, he should kill when he needs to nothing more nothing less. Those are just my thoughts. Author are you gonna come back to this book because I would love to this continue, it's so hard to find good overlord fanfics, plus ones that have an Angel as a MC is rare for novels as a whole from my searching.
Making your mc have a ' benevolent and righteous' character is quite boring. It would be more interesting if the mc was cunning and ruthless and had to fight his better nature to attain his goals. If not remember that angels are on the +500 morality scale so please add some of his internal struggles just like Ainz has with his immorality.