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The writing quality is pretty good its very easy to read with little to no mistakes. You update more than most people do a month. The characters feels really dull and lifeless. Asta doesn't even say their name. It's just "Wife", no saying their real names just wife. Then his wives don't call him his name just "Husband. Then he got all of the harem members so fast no real meaning full development. I like who the harem members are but you need to make them have a better love life than just "HuSbAnD" or "WiFe" The background is a harem black clover i just wish it was better
I write this review as one of the thousands of notices that I put, I suppose that if they read it, first of all it is an alternate universe where I will do everything to my liking, and also things would develop quite quickly because more than a fanfic it is a project I'm doing to learn some things. If you don't like things to unfold too quickly or anything typical, don't even bother reading.
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Great novel, this is one of the best black clover fanfic that i have ever read. Every character feels like they have life and emotions. Even Yuno who somehow became an arrogant and villain at first got his redemption and have someone who loves him. Every character too have its own story. The battles are great too and exciting. So for me this is 5 stars. Please keep up the good workππππ
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