Sally112425
Let us start with the negative. The only problem I found is that the chapters were too short! That is all I have to criticize about. Now for the positive: -Characters are strongly developed. I love the premise, it makes the plot more attention grabbing which piques both my interest and curiosity to read further in order to know what happens next. As for the stability of updates, this is always an automatic five for me since I prefer quality over quantity. -Not much of a problem when it comes to character design since I was able to portray all of them in a few paragraphs or so. It was an amazing read despite not it being the usual type of novels that I read. All in all, this novel deserves a total of five! -DZSC
Very strong engaging story. The characters are very strongly developed, and I like the fact that this story hints so much of the risque, but is not the main point of the story or plot. I'm very interested by the characters and how their interactions affect the world. So quite an interesting read if you like strong character building that leads to very natural story flow.
Indeed, a docile female lead! I prefer strong-willed leads who won't just sit still and take sht from everyone else, but since the first chapter clearly said that the lead was going to be docile, that's that. Overall, although there were some mistakes in the writing, I enjoyed it. Keep it up, author!