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Uh, this is my first attempt at writing a book. So... feedback would be great. Tell me if there's anything you want to see in the story and I'll try to implement it. Tell my where I'm wrong in my writing and I'll try to fix it.
Uh, this is my first attempt at writing a book. So... feedback would be great. Tell me if there's anything you want to see in the story and I'll try to implement it. Tell my where I'm wrong in my writing and I'll try to fix it.