tired123
I shall give you a truthful review on my own book. I update everyday so don't question the updating stability. The world background is set in modern/ancient time so the language is modernised but the overall setting is more ancient. My characters are adorable and I love them, so obviously my character design is brilliant. The story development is pretty good although it is quite slow. Overall, I love my story and wish for everyone to also love it, I don't tolerate hateful comments but love nice comments. Anyway, I suggest you read my book~ You won't regret it~ 😘
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more please! they are so freaking cute! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This is an interesting book! The plot is intriguing, and the dialogues are so expressive. I love the details in this book. But, for me, dialogues written in all capital letters are quite disturbing. I prefer to describe the dialogues with "he shouted" or "she snapped" or something like that. But, that's just my preference 😂 Overall, it's an enjoyable book. Thank you for the hard work 🤗
This story is easy to follow which I am thankful for. The differences in characteristics are promptly shown throughout the story. The background is very interesting and there are many mysteries that I can’t wait to be explored. Just some casual grammar errors but they are easily overlooked by how enjoyable and lively the story is. The chapter titles also giving a notice of them being NSFW is very helpful and considerate. Enjoying my reading journey so far!