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Reviews of The Rise of the Ero Masseuse System

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Escultor
EscultorLv4Escultor

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Oto
OtoLv4Oto

Utter trash. Even in comparison to other novels on this site where the MC gets cucked by his own harem, this novel falls short. The author has made the MC into an absolute retard who has a beta personality and believes that men exist solely to serve women (a simp). The MC can’t figure anything out on his own, nor can he understand when things are told to him, and repeated multiple times. The dialogue in this novel is complete and utter garbage. This author has clearly never read a book before, nor have they ever come into contact with the opposite ***. The conversations simply make you cringe and feel like they were written by an elementary schooler who still thinks cooties are real. As for the ‘***’ scenes. All it is is a bunch of heart emojis put in the middle of sentences with sterotypical moaning sounds. There’s no build-up, just 0-100 moaning. Even for ‘research’ this novel doesn’t qualify. I could go on and on about how terrible this novel is, but frankly, it doesn’t deserve that. If you want to read a real R18 novel, read Naked Sword Art or Dual Cultivation, which are actually good.

LucienClaus
LucienClausLv2LucienClaus

Its very Good Its very Good. Its very Good. Its very Good Its very Good Its very Good.. I hope you dont drop it... And just update more~~~~~~~~~~~

max360
max360Lv4max360

(Comment translated with google translator) Well, this is a story of a typical Japanese MC with an ero massage system, that is, a guy without personality who won a system worthy of protagonists like Konrad or Nik farran (if they are men of culture they will know about them) system that by the way outlines as a slave (although the author wants to fix it by putting the MC as a "jailer" of the women whom he gives massages) The protagonist is the typical virgin boy who watches **** and hentai, who is in love with his friend who has a boyfriend (words of the author) and all he does is wait for her to end that relationship so that he even tries something with her. His personality is very bad and that is not a good thing, since even the protagonists of shonen have a good attitude from the beginning, even if they are weak (perhaps because he is young or that is the author's excuse, since you cannot cite the real world if in your novel almost everyone has a system, nothing is normal) With regard to the friend of the mc, the author tries to justify his unique sexual life as "terrible" with the only option that we have empathy for her and we have no problems in opening her legs to the mc due to her experience with her boyfriend is very bad with respect to the mc, for her to leave her boyfriend and stay by the mc's side because of his system (if she wanted to put netori content, you'd better use another girl, not her only friend). Think about it, if the protagonist did not have that system, she will easily spread her legs to another guy who has an ero system, because she is dissatisfied If you came for the wincest tag, let me tell you that as the novel goes, it occurs between chapters 100-200 Finally, the mc allows himself to be blackmailed very easily and presents such a passive attitude that it is embarrassing, I hope that changes

EijiSeishuu
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_Baka_
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I really did try to like this but I just couldn't. The base premise is pretty good but the MC and who I assume is the FL are both just so unlikeable for me. The FL is a stupid character that stays in a bad relationship with a douche and the MC is the simp that stands on the sidelines doing simp things until he gets powers and then... He does simp things.

twintin_
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violet_purplemagic
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AKAS
AKASLv4AKAS

Nice concept, nice novel. good grammer and the chapters gave me a good erec... Impression. .................................................

_Name_Less_
_Name_Less_Lv2_Name_Less_

This is a materpiece, the smut scene are marvellous, the world building is really good and the characters are even better. However the author dosent do us justice with the ammount of chapters he releases. We need more chapters.

bssp_1997
bssp_1997Lv3bssp_1997

I want to read more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more of it.

kcorny
kcornyLv4kcorny

Little bit heavy on the exposition in the beginning but aside from that i like this very much. Several POV's, but made believeable through good writing. Also Netori. Author, if you drop this i swear to god i will find you.

l_love_truck_kun
l_love_truck_kunLv3l_love_truck_kun

updated updated updated updated updated updated updated updated mooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeee÷÷eeeeeeeee÷eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Makeruno
MakerunoLv5Makeruno

I love it, great story and netori element is nice to have though not strong in that regard as of now. Just need to know whether there's a stable update schedule, that will make me ascend this to 5 star.

Escultor
EscultorLv4Escultor

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JpJr
JpJrLv2JpJr

The story is so gooooood. It is not like your usual perversion system where they go cool, let me **** all my friends and family, he actually questions why and slowly the world is built around it.

alani_gomez
alani_gomezLv3alani_gomez

I cant believe how slow thus book updatesssssss liKe im seriously on the edge og my seat waiting fir it to update each day 😭😭 sadddnessssssss😐

Pikachu_7407
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I really like this novel, unlike most this novel properly introduces the system and doesnt just drop it like a flippen MOAB from sky. Definetly would recommend 10/10

Baggalee
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Weezyf
WeezyfLv3Weezyf

This MC Is simping for his best friend who already has a boyfriend... she only leaves her boyfriend after finding out that he cheated on her and mc accept to become her rebound and plot armor make her fall in love such bs main girl Was loving someone else All this time, her bf also always bully mc Yet she didnt do anything about it **** this shit