Jarod_Morgan
read this back on wattpad when I still read, and wrote in there was a absolutely wonderful book, but I have no bloody clue if if I reread it I would feel the same p.s when the **** did you start posting on here did you get a offer in your messages like me on wattpad? obviously I didn't accept mine since I have no story's on her, but still
This novel has some potential and it seems interesting, but either the chapters are messed up or something because halfway through reading a chapter, it would completely change scenes and continue from one a few chapters before. Not sure if it got uploaded wrong or is meant to be like that, but whatever it is it needs to be fixed since it ruins the story and doesn't make it an enjoyable read. If it gets fixed than I'll change my review to reflect the changes but as lf right now it will stay as is.
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I really like the story so far. The story is really nice, but sometimes I get confuse as to what it's happening at what point in the story. The world building is slow, and something I don't understand of this kind of worlds is why there aren't any guns? clearly the technology to produce them is there. Great Work
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