Reviews of The Rebirth of Evelyn Knox
The Rebirth of Evelyn Knox
DustyDream
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Just it having yuri is a straight up 5 star from me, I literally cannot for the love of me read any romance beside yuri anymore, It's becoming hard to find good novels.
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I think if you're looking for a smart and cute MC with an interesting system and very good WB this is definitely worth a shot. The hints are there but the yuri prolly still has a way to go before its confirmed. I'm here for just the yuri and the cute mc but ofc the other things are very good bonus too. I hope it's yuri harem too, but its ok if its not. Recommend- Yuri/System/SmartMC fans Not for- SelflessMC
First of all I want to say that I really like the story and the characters. But what I don't like is that the main character is under constant pressure to get stronger. Just when one opponent is dealt with the next one is already there. In my Opinion the Author should give the mc and her friends more time for development. (It Doesn't matter if she is 20 or 100 years old in this kind of Novel) and when there are peaceful times they are mostly just scipped and no real character development in that scipped time. now I wrote mostly negative things but that's just because I'm not good at writing what I like, sorry.
It's only 10 chapters in so I can't say for sure, but so far I love the story. I like how you put so much attention into everything (unless it's all random, which I hope is not), all characters and things have names, but I don't feel forced to remember them, Very good. It's not bad to not have names on everything but I like it this way, The system setup is very good and detailed. It looks like everything means something, so I like it. There is one thing very important to me. If you can answer me this, please. I will not ask too much, just tell me roughly how long the story is going to be? Short, Medium, Long? This much hint is fine. Now I will nitpick, if you like good critique you can take it. If you don't please ignore below text. If I had to pick one thing I hate the most about it, it's that the only info on the world and system we're getting is based on what the MC thinks so it makes me doubt everything. I don't know if it's a bad thing or good thing. Another nitpick. I think you should do 2 updates a day. Your story has a lot of detail so the pacing is very slow even if it looks fast when reading, which I don't like personally.
im not good at writing reviews so pls bare with me i quite webnovel for a while after both the novel i was following got dropped. i like to read from when the story starts and read as it get updated slowly. i return and look for a good novel to start. those that look ok alr have too many chapters for me. i come across this and fall in love. ok so on to the review- writing quality - my english is bad (3rd lang lol) but i think its pretty good. it makes me feel good, theres nothing i dont understand, and thats all i want. stability of update: theres daily update so im happy, pls keep it up story: its just started so i dont know but it looks like author has a lot of plan. everything is very detailed so i think the story gonna be good. chara design: to me most important is mc and i love her character in this. evelyn is very cute but also shes the mc i really want. she didnt hesitate or regret killing the guy when her life was at stake. i hate wishy washy mc. she still has good side. she adore little vivi, she like amara, she love her parents. shes not lazy and make decision fast. when she wanted to beat tristan up she went and did it. lol. overall i think very good. world background: i have no idea tbh. maybe later we know, rn too little info (im chapter 9). ok so thats done. author i hope u keep updating this wonderful story, i love it so much.
I believe this is something that deserves to be on Webnovel's front page and it's a shame that it's shadowed by hundreds of unoriginal works. The author should be very proud not only of the skills but also of the time and effort it takes to create something so simple in concept yet so interesting and complex. In case you can't already tell, I love this novel
Okay, so I loved this author's other novel very very much that I read this with the hope that it would be almost the same but it wasn't similar in the least. It just seemed different and reading more chapters, I found this novel to be really good in its own right. So I'm going to rid of my bias and point out what I liked about this novel. The writing quality was really good like how it was for your other novel. The narration tone was surprisingly different compared to the other novel. I didn't know the narration tone of an author could be changed( i thought it was unique like a fingerprint)...But for some reason, I loved this narration style a whole lot more than the other novel. Now chapter updates are really good, almost daily releases with some bonus releases here and there. The chapters aren't small and are actually bigger than average. The plot is both cliche and unique. Typical transmigration with a system but with its own unique twists and ideas. Foreshadowing builds up quite a lot of anticipation for the future. But there are some bad plotholes that I'm not going to state in order to not spoil. I'm quite excited about the future plot. Now characters are really well developed. The MC, her friends, and others have their own distinct personalities and traits, You could actually identify a character from one or two dialogues. The side characters aren't that much neglected which is nice but I hope for more side stories from other's perspectives. The world is really really abstract right now. I can for some reason get a grasp on the world. There has been info on the rulers but I hope for there to be a little bit more detailed ideas on the ancient families, the royal family, and in total about the entire world itself. Actually, world development might be the only glaring weakness for this novel. This is a personal opinion so Actually, I wish for a harem but it's okay if it isn't, BUT PLEASE PLEASE don't make every girl every girl fall in love with members of their own group. Don't ship every member of Evelyne's party within themselves, I will literally go into a depression. Yuri is okay but multiple yuri is big NO-NO for me Overall a good job author-san, I loved it and it feels really interesting to read. I have big hopes for the future. You are one of my favorite authors on this site and I thank you from bottom of my heart for writing such a good novel.
The author should add the tag #antihero to the novel. Honestly, I don't think MC is a human, she's more of a monster. A monster that feels no guilt for killing someone, even if it's the villain in the novel. Believe me, everyone feels bad about killing other people, except monsters. Worse than that, she mocked them for having nothing of value after death or having fun using their corpses. The novel started off very well, I had imagined the MC as an unfortunate girl who had a new life, struggling with her fate and protecting her loved ones. I was wrong, the author turned the MC into a monster without any emotions, on the surface everything was fun for the MC and friends, but otherwise, it was disgusting to me.
Good story. Although you might think that typical isekai with typical system, and typical anime-like twists, and you will be right but everything is implemented in an extremely refreshing way. ///little spoiler Where else will there be a protagonist with a system that will not kill any enemy in 100 chapters? And then in a month she will reach the level of a professor by chance? Or will make full use of her background to slap everyone in the face? It was refreshing. ///end of spoiler But what is sad is the number of possible loopholes in history. This is more than excusable in another author's story, since the main theme there is Yuri romance. Evelyn story, on contrary, is more traditional type of story, so such mistakes are very striking. And it's also scary to imagine how long it will take when we see the real Yuri... given the author's unhurried style and slow speed of writing, years will pass.
I really wanted to give this a higher rating. The cultivation aspect of this story is nonexistent. The protagonist has this really overpowered cultivation technique but has never been seen on screen using it, nor has she gained a single level from using it. Others have been seen to get multiple levels of experience from cultivating but our OP MC has not gained any. It’ very strange and makes me wonder why cultivation even exists if all the MC does is power level from killing mobs. Logically our protagonist could go power farm beast after beast and get level 100 in a few hours with her teachers help. Higher stats lead into better killing power = now you can go deeper in the forest and repeat the cycle.
