Reviews of The Rebellious Son of Lucifer

A total disappointment of a novel. Started good and had great potential. Went downhill so fast. For example, MC started world war 4 cuz he hated Beta MC stories, among other things. 15 chapters in, dude is an absolute Japanese Beta MC. A total simp that let's multiple girls walk over him. MC is supposed to have great enimity and wants revenge against his father and his step mom hates him. MC does a complete back flip of personality in 1 chap. No reason at all.

You know I'd have thought the he'd be more patience but MC is a literal child throwing temper tantrums and literally forgot ROBS warning the second day he arrived there. and the sudden gain of power has made him an arrogant Douce who thinks he's all that, and the only thing left for him to do to be a full blown Chinese Protagonist is him thinking with his third leg. Which is probably gonna happen soon enough but I ain't staying to find out.

ngl I am disappointed... - when I saw the title I actually expected a fic about the son of the REAL/original Lucifer and not Sirzechs GREMORY...! in truth all I wish for is a fic in w which the mc doesn't take the 'easy route' by becoming Sirzechs' kid only so he could get the p.o.d but rather choose the real Lucifer and explore just what can he achieve with the most powerful bloodline of the devil race, a bloodline which is said to be the strongest of the four Satans' (all of which are stronger than the 72 pillars' and extra demons'...)

The story had great potential in the beginning but then the whole character of the MC became inconsistent from cha 15 and makes all his actions in chapter 1 be an act of complete stupidity though some of you may like it that's besides the point but overall the story doesn't follow the given title of the book and the MC is bipolar with no determination to complete his set goal and a Beta too image. So I'm out really but good luck with the story

If I had to describe this FF, it would be like this (he is a hypocritical Beta Mc who hates Betas and thinks he's Alpha.)....................................................

And really disappointing. The mc is a total simp, totally forced relationships and without any kind of construction, an example of this is one of the first cap that sona sitri appears out of nowhere at his house and we know that they liked each other, if it was to have some kind of relationship, I would prefer that had rebirth instead of transmigration to be able to build characters. Mc has a hatred for his father and his relatives that disappears as if it never existed. But the worst thing for me was the forced relationship he had with Aika, who to say from the interactions they had, she seemed more like a boring girl who keeps bothering the mc, but she, by the work of "destiny" discovers the supernatural and the mc wants to keep her with their memories because they are friends. hahahahaha

Chapters 1-18 I am disappointed ahhhhhhhhhj😔 😶😶😶😶😶😶😶😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😯😯😯😯😯😯😯😯😯😯😯😯😯😯 😯............................................

Hubiera sido mejor si hubieras sido en nieto de zouken , el MC más manipulable que he leído ni tiene pelotas de nada se deja mandonear por lo que sea jajaja si esto se borra el autor es un completo mandamás

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I'll be honest here, I gave this story a real shot, but at chapter 16 I just couldn't stomach it anymore. The MC is from the start is utterly unlikeable and acts like a stereotypical Karen. The worldbuilding is completely 1 dimensional. I would absolutely not recommend this fic to anyone.

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Lo digo y lo vuelvo a decir mejor hubiera sido la mascota de zouken matou para que así hubiera sido manejable , hubiera sido su fiel perra su mascota jajaja este historia el autor no sabe cómo dirigir al MC es un completo titere perdona así padre perdona a su madrastra va perdonar a todos si mata alguien será por qué el autor lo quiso y no habrá nada contradiga completamente basura, autor es mejor que veas la realidad al comienzo pensé que era un MC que pensaba por qué como hablo con ROB daba Aires de que era una persona que razonaba ahora veo que el autor también es manipulable me largo de aquí sigan con títeres manipulables de eso se trata está historia como ser manipulado

the most absurd DXD fic I've ever read. in the early chapters he was very weak and had a plan to take revenge against Sirzechs, and then suddenly he became very strong and could even fight against ophis! in less than 10 chapters after that it became more ridiculous. MC doesn't practice at all and suddenly Ophis said she can't win against him if they fight again. you will think this fic is about Mc's revenge against sirzechs and grayfia?big NO. I don't care about mc that suddenly forgiving sirzechs and grayfia for no reason, but MC personality will make readers really stupid because you don't know he is beta or alpha mc. one second he is rude and arrogant towards everyone but if he got teased slightly he will blush and act like a baby. the author also change Rias and the others personalities so much that it will confuse you and even make you think you are reading an oc character, not a DXD character. i'm sure in the later chapters mc won't even use his full power so the plot will still go on like any other fic. the only charm if you want to read this fic? only for the harems. a fic with absurd power stronger than ophis in less than 20 chapters is just stupid for me. I'm out.

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I am enhoyinf this novel, it has potential and above all I find the story interesting keep up the great work

I say this in advance, this story 4 star ranking not 5... But since there are cringe people out here, I decided to increase the ranking a bit... Even if it is little. Now, story is not that bad. It has its edges, but the writer is a new one. He had a lot time to improve himself/herself. I have questions about his powers and all, but well, I guess the MC not that cringy, considering other DxD stuff. Now, the MC is OP, very OP, he can win against Ophis, so I do not know what he will do? I mean, he is already strong enough. I do not know what his goals are, so that is a down; but I'll wait this author to improve his writing in this novel, then I'll wait for the next one. I hope you find happiness in writing, because you got talent. Lacking experiences only disappears when you write and read. So, this is too long actually... Meh, whatever. I like your book, hope you'll improve in due time and show the people your story!

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You know you're doing something wrong when you get less than 4 stars on WEBNOVEL. I swear I saw so many bad fanfics on this site and even those have near 5 stars.

Gran escritura, aunque los personajes se sentían algo extraños. Pero no demasiado. Lastima que el punto principal fuera decepcionante, el protagonista tsundere con complejo de víctima era simplemente infumable. Tuvo sus momentos de Sigma, pero eran momentos tan forzados que era doloroso leer. Para otra novela no hagas al MC un marica y todo irá bien.