Not a Chapter

Yeah sorry, I'm still writing and editing the next two chapters. I just wanted to ask as this story hasn't been getting as many views as I thought it would. Is the story uninteresting? Should I improve something? Is it moving too slow or too fast?

I am writing this story casually and for fun but I'm curious if my writing has certain areas that need improvement. I'm sure there alot of things to improve but knowing what specifically would help.

Thanks in advance. Next chapter Sunday or Monday.