I see that you made another story at a short time but the quality of the writing is bad Im a fellow writer but I know some basic like puting a gupble quotes and stuff
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uhm i can say that your a novice novel writer but you the plot is interesting to me so yeah maybe ill keep reading it when there's an update you should read other novels to spice up and improve your writing
So far, I found the plot interesting. As for the writing quality, there's always a room for improvement. Always strive to become a better. đ„°đđ„°
The dream sequence as an opening was good (guilty, I wrote the same thing in my novel đ ) The plot and title were interesting to make readers look into the story. I hope you continue to improve your writing
I checked the synopsis and the first chapter and I can say that you built the interest to hook ur readers already which is great, continue this novel, you have my full support!