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Reviews of The Queen's flower, you ruined Come's back for revenge

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The Queen's flower, you ruined Come's back for revenge

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Melissa_Podebrat_8819
Melissa_Podebrat_8819Lv1Melissa_Podebrat_8819

I see that you made another story at a short time but the quality of the writing is bad Im a fellow writer but I know some basic like puting a gupble quotes and stuff

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lux_smith
lux_smithLv1lux_smith

uhm i can say that your a novice novel writer but you the plot is interesting to me so yeah maybe ill keep reading it when there's an update you should read other novels to spice up and improve your writing

BerriApplepi
BerriApplepiLv11BerriApplepi

So far, I found the plot interesting. As for the writing quality, there's always a room for improvement. Always strive to become a better. đŸ„°đŸ’–đŸ„°

GCarre
GCarreLv11GCarre

The dream sequence as an opening was good (guilty, I wrote the same thing in my novel 😅) The plot and title were interesting to make readers look into the story. I hope you continue to improve your writing

inflict
inflictLv4inflict

The plot is good and promising, I hope the author can continue updating so we could see more of Chloe's journey!

Midnight_Raven0425
Midnight_Raven0425Lv10Midnight_Raven0425

I checked the synopsis and the first chapter and I can say that you built the interest to hook ur readers already which is great, continue this novel, you have my full support!