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Okay...if you don't like harem then don't read this Fan-fic because this is literally a Harem Fan-fc and also for those who doesn't like NTR not really sure if i would put one who not really recommended for those who doesn't like it. And give me some review so i can make this story better and this is a world travel Fan-fic just so you know, because i hate being stuck in one world more like i had a limited idea on it, and i won't get bored anyways that all thank you for reading!
I am really story you had to read this story. It is a turd, a steaming turd with zero redeeming qualities or any originality tied to it. From horrible inexcusable bad grammar to mediocre plot and characters. Your time is wasted here, please leave your 1 star review and leave to find some higher quality stories elsewhere.
- "·strike the blood·" = (https://strike-the-blood.fandom.com/wiki/La_Folia_Rihavein). - ·Shinmai Maō no Keiyakusha· = (https://shinmaimaou.fandom.com/wiki/Mio_Naruse). - fairi tail = (https://fairytail.fandom.com/es/wiki/Ultear_Milkovich),(https://fairytail.fandom.com/wiki/Irene_Belserion). - naruto = kushina uzumaki and mikoto uchiha ,(https://naruto.fandom.com/wiki/Konan). - bleach = (https://bleach.fandom.com/wiki/Rukia_Kuchiki). - shakugan no shana = (https://shakugan.fandom.com/wiki/Shana). - one piece = (https://onepiece.fandom.com/wiki/Boa_Hancock). - fate stay nigh = (https://typemoon.fandom.com/wiki/Saber_(Fate/stay_night)). - Rosario + Vampire = (https://rosariovampire.fandom.com/wiki/Moka_Akashiya). - soul eater = (https://souleater.fandom.com/wiki/Maka_Albarn). - nanatsu no Tazai = 'gelda' , (https://nanatsu-no-taizai.fandom.com/wiki/Merlin). - hischold of the dead = shisuka , saya ,(https://hotd.fandom.com/wiki/Saeko_Busujima) - damanchi = (https://danmachi.fandom.com/wiki/Ais_Wallenstein). - shingeki no kyojin = (https://shingeki-no-kyojin.fandom.com/wiki/Mikasa_Ackerman). - "Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei"= (https://mahouka-koukou-no-rettousei.fandom.com/es/wiki/Shiba_Miyuki). - "·TO LOVE RU·" = (https://toloveru.fandom.com/es/wiki/Lala_Satalin_Deviluke) , (https://toloveru.fandom.com/es/wiki/Momo_Belia_Deviluke). -"·Date a live·" = (https://date-a-live.fandom.com/wiki/Category:Characters). -·Trinity Seven· = (https://trinity-seven.fandom.com/es/wiki/Lilith_Asami). -·Infinite Stratos·= (https://infinitestratos.fandom.com/es/wiki/Wiki_Infinite_Stratos). -·Sword Art Online·= (https://swordartonline.fandom.com/es/wiki/Wiki_Sword_Art_Online). -·Campione!·= (https://thecampione.fandom.com/wiki/Campione!_Wiki). -mushuko tensei. -"·Sekirey·"= (https://sekirei.fandom.com/es/wiki/Sekirei). -·Seirei tsukai no blade dance· = (https://seirei-tsukai-no-blade-dance.fandom.com/es/wiki/Restia_Ashdoll). -(https://listas.20minutos.es/lista/mejores-animes-harem-388933/). etc
first of all why does the author say am making him a cold personality type of character next thing you know mc is showing off his sword and trying to impress a Loli and from their his mentality keeps degrading to a ****. author really needs to learn how to stick to a personality on his mc. still I give credit to author for trying to write and improve from their. So in total it's a DECENT story in MY opinion.
For real. I looked into this novel because I saw my favorite anime character Merlin on the cover. And I thought it would start typically, God matters. However, it started differently and I will say that I liked it. The whole strong scene at the beginning and the motive of revenge made me read this novel with more pleasure. So thanks for that and I hope you will reach 100 chapters. Keep it up.
With the grammar this story is painfully to read, the story itself seems ok, not good, ok, but the grammar makes it unreadable for me. You might consider getting an editor. I was not able to get past the first chapter, so I don't know if there are improvements later on. That said my first impressions are not good.