Reviews of The Phisloke Evolution

This is very fun read with a cool plot and character developmeny. I reccomend to anyone who likes adventure stories:)

Author here. If you take the time to read the first chapter, please let me know what you think and how Icould make it better. Since this is my first Novel I will definitely appreciate all feedback from anyone. Thanks in advance.

Ehh the hook is decent but at the same time not really i recommend rewriting the beginning chapters to have a better hook and make it so theres a challenge to improve himself instead of plot armor

A very good novel. The writing quality is amazing, it is updated regularly, the story is very well-paced and the ideas are executed amazingly. The mc is also not idiotic like other MCs that I have known. The world background can also be understood easily, although some aspects are not properly covered. I feel like adding some different POVs to the story will definitely make it better. And, I feel like the mc's journey is going a little too smoothly. His personality is a bit confusing, which is okay, I guess because people are like that as well, but it would be better to show some personality development. Overall, it is a very good novel.