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Reviews of The Original Harry Potter

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The Original Harry Potter

xShadowyLegendx

  • Overall Rate
  • Writing Quality
  • Updating Stability
  • Story Development
  • Character Design
  • world background

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NiceReviewer
NiceReviewerLv4NiceReviewer

The mature author called "xShadowyLegendx" (the more x's in your name, the cooler you are on the school playground) boldly claims he will "improve" the story and "make it more realistic". I wish him luck and when he finally gets past puberty and loses his pimple face he may actually write without soiling his keyboard.

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xShadowyLegendx
xShadowyLegendxAuthorxShadowyLegendx

Shameless Good in everything but the update quality The Characters are different than their original counter parts, there are some original characters are good, the plot so far is interesting, I can't wait to see where the story goes.

MONARCHOFSTORMS
MONARCHOFSTORMSLv4MONARCHOFSTORMS

I feel like it's an amazing story going from a different point of view and that the way the story is going is just perfect it's slow paced and not to fast but the update stability is terrible please give me more chapters I must read I want to see Harry grow up to be ruthless and cunning just like it says in the tags please give me more.

Munchnax
MunchnaxLv4Munchnax

So far it is a very well written and entertaining story. So far the only problem is it’s slow pace as “Harry” grows up. Hoping he makes it to hog warts soon! Thanks Author!😁

Joseph_Boardwalk
Joseph_BoardwalkLv3Joseph_Boardwalk

Great Story Would Recommend, only downside is it needs more chapters. Yet there is alot of story & good ideas in the chapters it has so far. will be checking back from time to time to see if there are new chapters thank you author for writing such a good FanFic

Snack0
Snack0Lv1Snack0

Nice. Please Update ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

uflesh940
uflesh940Lv3uflesh940

It's quite good. ooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooo

Daoist1rvBov
Daoist1rvBovLv1Daoist1rvBov

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

RoseAmber
RoseAmberLv13RoseAmber

🌹💎 Hope this isn't dropped.

Phoenix1998
Phoenix1998Lv6Phoenix1998

Really good please update more.Really good please update more.Really good please update more.Really good please update more.Really good please update more.

amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

STUPID FUCK.....OP MC...smart...calculative...and an SI....dope but why stupid...bru I found this by luck...And damn... it would've been sad if I never found this...wrong category bru...put it in fanfics....also...just saying...this is dope