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Reviews of The Origin (MultiVerse Fanfic)

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The Origin (MultiVerse Fanfic)

ProfessorNoob

  • Overall Rate
  • Writing Quality
  • Updating Stability
  • Story Development
  • Character Design
  • world background

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Revised
RevisedLv4Revised

Amazing fanfic. I like the MC attitude and personality. I also enjoy the interactions with the characters! Also the author of this fanfic is very funny (the author notes between paragraphs make me lmao🀣🀣) Enjoying the worlds so far cant wait to see which world the author chooses next!

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Utcz
UtczLv1Utcz

man, I like the fic but you could slow down a little in familiar situations, skip less time and add more dialogues, and to not get long just mention less important moments

Poseidon_God
Poseidon_GodLv5Poseidon_God

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FAP_Master_
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Silver_Epsilon
Silver_EpsilonLv12Silver_Epsilon

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jeanpierregerardo
jeanpierregerardoLv5jeanpierregerardo

interesing. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Daoist21616161
Daoist21616161Lv4Daoist21616161

Quite regular the truth, the writing is a bit loose. MC acts as a babysitter. Good luck.

Ramenguy_teuchi
Ramenguy_teuchiLv3Ramenguy_teuchi

keep the good work author!!!!!!. I liked the story so far!!!! πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

LordKram
LordKramLv12LordKram

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Rifa_Jati
Rifa_JatiLv5Rifa_Jati

ok this is my review. Writing Quality 5/5: although there are still mistakes but for me it is enough to understand. Story Development 5/5: I love the story development in every world that MC visits. although there are still a few that are odd but still good (for me). Character Design 4/5: I have commented where Mc touched his woman in public but I was wrong. I read back from the beginning and I just realized it was not the groping part. But the kissing where the Mc kissing the dragon girls in front his Guardian Flore for no other reason than the pleasure of kissing ( in the top chapter there is a scenes where Mc kisses in front of his friend but in this scenes Mc has a reason ). other than that the basics of Mc character are good. Updating Stability 5/5 : Everyday Update of course it 5. World Background 5/5 : For now there is no problem, I like the author's thoughts for WB. Ok that it. Thank for you work author. I enjoy your work. I hope you are still passionate about making this work better πŸ˜†πŸ‘. Sorry if there is a wrong word that i wrote.

ThelazyFox
ThelazyFoxLv2ThelazyFox

Isang chapter palang Meron na agad Malibog yata yung author na to hahaha and the story is very good I hope the author Notice this notice me senpai (Gubbersh)hsjdhdhfbfbfbjfjfjfjfjfjdjzndbdjdndndnncjcjcjfjfbrbdndnfjciic

FAP_Master_
FAP_Master_Lv6FAP_Master_

Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.

big_bobs_mom
big_bobs_momLv12big_bobs_mom

I think you should temporarily remove the genre and for parental controls for the Power Stone to appear again[img=recommend] Keep the spirit I like it[img=recommend] Keep the spirit I like it[img=recommend]

LordKram
LordKramLv12LordKram

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Barth0ld
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Good luck!! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Madara1137
Madara1137Lv4Madara1137

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Smoll_FuHua
Smoll_FuHuaLv4Smoll_FuHua

Good Fanfic, Read this!!!!!! Don't drop this!!!! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Ichigo766
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Iinchou
IinchouLv5Iinchou

a story full of desire but i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

ProfessorNoob
ProfessorNoobAuthorProfessorNoob

My fanfic so I am going to give myself a five! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘