Reviews of THE ORDER OF THE ELEMENTS
THE ORDER OF THE ELEMENTS
Zane_Earth
- Overall Rate
- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
So, I was hooked on it the moment I read it. There are grammatical errors but the story makes up for it. I look forward to more! (Loved the death reference in the beggining~)
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Nice story! The vomedic takes on this story make it entertaining in its own way. The only things that stopped me from giving a full 5 stars is the grammar and word choice elements throughout. I'm kind of a stickler for those kinds of things unfortunately. If readers love a story with bits of comedy in a fantasy world setting and an epic MC to follow, this is your book! Just beware of the slight gore detail here and there as presented in the prologue. Keep writing!
Writing Quality: 4/5 Reason: some verbs were missing but the message is there.. I hope the author would have some less punctuation marks next time. Stability of the Updates: 5/5 Reason: the updates of the chapters were constant and the author did not disappoint with each chap. Story Development: 5/5 Reason: I've only read the first chap but I am already hooked and the story is already right down the middle but the flow is never ruined or anything. Character Design: 4/5 Reason: it is not clear what the characters look like from the first chapter.. I think a little bit of description of the MC would do the trick. World Background: 5/5 Reason: It is quite similar to Avatar but it is still unique in the sense of the author writes the whole plot. Overall, I think the little issue here is the sentence structure but nonetheless, it is a fun book to read.
Hellloooo,Halloooo I am the author of this story and I just realized I didn't even make some reviews about my novel. I did not give my novel perfect since I just started but I am sure you guys would be happy to read my novel. I welcome any comments about my mistakes or i you guys had any ideas about romance or fight scene please comment (after all I am a newbie(ᗒᗩᗕ)(ᗒᗩᗕ)). Once again, Thanks for reading my novel. I GOT SPOILER FOR THIS NOVEL..... scroll down to know the spoiler (i suggest don't because it would break your heart) SPOILER(AT THE END OF THE NOVEL) All the tribes and peoples who had the elemental power will die and turn into the dust of glittering diamonds. The main character with his wife and his friend(the guardians) will die. War will end for more than a thousand of year's and the Guardian became legends. But soon a kid will try to save the guardians by time travelling. ( so that it heheheeh don't worry you guys will meet your fav character after this book fin)
