This story really reminds of novels like TNE, TCF (This applies more to this novel's previous incarnation, which I also enjoy) and a bit of omniscient reader's viewpoint, which I guess inspired this novel. And it doesn't just reminds me of plot of these amazing stories (all of which I highly recommend) but also how refreshed I felt when reading them, considering all the other works like most cultivation novels becoming boring for me. So yeah, this novel, I recommend you at least give it a chance, even if you can't find it enjoyable as I did, you can just stop reading and not like spread any hate (like spam un-constructive, negative comments, it can seriously ruin the author's motivation and day)
Language is decent, not too bad and obvious enough to ruin the story for me. But that maybe because of english being a 2nd language for me so it isn't too bad. But beware you grammar nazis haha.
It's update stability is decent not bad so nothing much to say here.
Story dev, char design and world background, don't have much to talk about since the plot hasn't really started yet. But the current story as for how it seems to be heading is really simple but interesting, nonetheless. The current characters are likeable, or as likeable as they can possibly be for people we don't know much about yet, MC seems to be not too dumb and has a decent, normal personality. The world building is simple, not too deeply explored yet, but it is fine for the novel's current pace
So yeah, I recommend giving this novel a chance as you might enjoy it too. Good work author! And continue with your current pace and continue provide us to quality work! :) 👍👍