IntrovertedWriters
This being my first review wont hold much content as some would like. All I can say is, this is a great read. Anyone could begin this story and enjoy it as much as I do, hopefully. There are a few grammar errors with 'was' and 'became' but that can be fixed after being a veteran reader with a built in auto correct.
Since i realized that this is a fan translation I believe you should lessen on the sound effects like fu-un or other effects and find a way to make it natural cause other wise it just comes off as annoying geekish writing. Pretty great story . The chapters are too long though I am guessing the original is a physical novel or light novel. If not then either way maybe turn the chapters into parts as otherwise reading for a long time just make it boring to read after awhile. instead having shorter chapters would do and the conversations are too long..but this is a translation so i guess not much you could do on it. well pretty good though keep it up.
Well, first, this one was my first novel ever. After this, I've read about 30 other novels. I really like this WN. I want to see more chapters. This kind of plot, story and romance was new for me. After seeing, it's manga, I was excited because I could see their appearances and all these characters. I wanna write more but can't, so I really recommend this WN. P.s. Authors, where is our Volume 3 :D