Quite good. BUT ALAS, NOT ENOUGH. MOAR MOAR MOARM OAR MOAR MOAMROAMROAMRO MAORM AORMAO RMAORM AORM OAMRO AMRO MAORM AORM AOMROAMROAM ORAMRO MAORMAO RMAO MROAMRO AMROAM ROAMR OAMR OAMR OAMRO MARO AMORAMO RMAORMAOMR OAMROMAR OAMRO AMROAM ROAM ORAMOR MAORM AORM AOM ROAMR OA MOAMROAM ORAMORM OAMRO MOAR MOAR MOAR
I like your story man, I find it to be a very enjoyable read. Here is what I think about it. 1. I know that English apparently not your first language which contributes to the lesser grammar, but it is easy to understand even with little mistakes here and there. 2. The character design is pretty poor because some of the characters feel nothing like how they are portrayed in the actual story. Trust me, I know it is harder to nail the personalities of other characters, so I commend you for that. 3. I found the system thing tolerable, but it was a little bit excessive. If you gave somebody unlimited points, what would stop them from becoming a literal God? Honestly, I don't really support the system idea, but it works nicely. Overall, I recommend giving it a shot. If you are into excessively OP characters and can deal with some of the issues I have listed, then you will enjoy it. 4.2 Stars
I really like the fanfict and whatever happen in it. Everything is good,overall is good. I am wanting for moaaarrr. I really like the fanfict and whatever happen in it. Everything is good,overall is good. I am wanting for moaaarrr. I really like the fanfict and whatever happen in it. Everything is good,overall is good. I am wanting for moaaarrr.
mc is way too op, so as the typical case with op mc the author needs to make him take retarded/nonsensical decisions so the plot can go on ppl should stop using "systems", no better way to ruin a story
What about the updates? You haven't updated for 4 months and you didn't say anything about dropping or In Hitus. Waited for 4 months how much more. Enjoyed the story and cool MC. Waiting for new chapter, please don't disappoint me.
Good fanfiction Thanks for author to this fanfiction ... .... ... .... ... ... ... .... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... .. .... ..... ..... ..... ..... ......
O had high hopes for this but sadly it failed me. πππππππππππππππππ©π©πππππππ©π©ππππππππ©π©π©πππππππ©π©ππππππππππ©π©
Go go go crazy!!! Mikasa-chan~~~~~~~~~~ .~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ .~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ .~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ . . . . . . . . I LOVE IT~~~~
will u continue to update?? will u continue to update?? will u continue to update?? will u continue to update?? will u continue to update??. how often will u update?? how often will u update?? how often will u update?? how often will u update?? how often will u update??.
Moreeeeee moreeeeeee moreeeeee moreeeeeee moreeeeee moreeeeeee moreeeeee moreeeeeee moreeeeee moreeeeeee moreeeeee moreeeeeee moreeeeee moreeeeeee thanks for the effort author-san πππ
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dude that is one of the most amazing fanfics that i have ever read!!!!!!!β€ππππ§‘π§‘π€β€ππππ§‘ππ€β€ππππ§‘ππ€πππππππ€ͺπ€ͺπ€ͺπ€ͺπ€ͺπ€ͺπ€ͺπ€ͺπ€ͺπ€ͺπ€ͺπ€ͺπ€ͺπ€ͺππππ
Its good its good its good its good its good its good its good its good its good its good its good its good its good its good its good its good
I want more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more nya !!!!
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I'ver never like AOT but I really like your fanfic, keep up the good work.
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first myanmar suthor in this site......so excited bro.....................hope u continue the story....................................................
I really wanna read this but I love AOT so much that I feel like a system and all these other anime abilities will ruin it for me. I haven't read nor will I but I just wanted this here so the author knows that some people won't read not because the story isnt good but because their die hard fan like myself . Good like author-san. I pray your path has Zero writers block and a safe journey through the dao of cliff hangers
MC acts like a Chinese cultivation protagonist. Claimed to want to treat Mikasa better than how Eren treated her, but then proceeds to date another female, which then makes the story a 2 girl harem. So yeah, MC gains op powers in AOT, wants to make Mikasas life better, breaks that exact promise by bringing another girl into their relationship, gets into unnecessary problems, couldve saved Eren from going down his Emo phase by saving Erens mother but decides not to (not that I cared). All in all, wasnt for me π€·ββοΈ