Kaylee_B
coming together nicely, keep it up! nice framework, few grammar mistakes but a few revisions will take care of that. interested to see the story grow!
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really great and I understand. More revising in the background. Update must be consistent and steady plus how the readers memorize the character. Good luck in your story.[img=recommend]