The Midnight Assasin

This work has a lot of potential with impressive approach consisting a intriguing plot. Descriptively tailored world background development along with a traditional touch. Her concept is well thought out along with intensely packed sequence of events tallying revenge, action and romance. I like her work very much! Keep on working hard, Author!

A nice and interesting read. I can tell much as of now since the plot is still starting to unveil. I'll lurk back from time to time. May the author write more, edit more, learn more, and, maybe one day, earn more!

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I have to be honest you got something good here, not gonna lie. The world and the setting are pretty good and well thought out, the characters are also well written and enjoyable especially the MC. The only problem is the lack of chapters, other than that it's pretty good!

Great work on what you have so far, Author! The descriptions and pacing are decent, and they keep me interested right up until I run out of things to read. Keep up the good work!

You have an idea and just write and don't worry about errors. We are here to learn and improve our talents ;) Even with the errors it's nice to read... I like the intriguing plot. Keep writing! I wish you a lot of gooood ideas!

This is a great read demonstrating an interesting angle that keeps you craving for more. I have great expectation for Esmerelda and hoping for more action. Slice and dice your enemies dear princess. Thank you dear author.