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Hi author here, only to let you know that in my first chapter I saw some errors, still understandable. I'm busy with writing now, but I'll edit when I get the chance. please bear with me. yeah, I forgot to place "." , "," in just a few places (just in first chapters you may see some". Thanks for your support anyways, this one needs your vote.
This story has piqued my interest, but I do not know why it has been given its current rating. The author is not native to English, so I would not recommend reading this novel if you are looking for easy reading. I read what I could but have yet to find anything substantial in the story, as it is buried in grammatical errors. I will be checking on this book to see how the author improves, and I hope they continue their writing. For now, however, this novel reads like an MTL. (Machine Translation) TL;DR The story looks interesting, but the grammar needs some work.
Let me start with good things: Worldbackgorund is (spoiler!) not so fun, it is very well wrtitten and introduced with solid logic behind it with a pinch of fantasy. Characters: I like the development of them and thier adventures - feels kind of post apocaliptic slice of life. I must say that the MC name is kind og unique had to read for 10 chapters until I stopped reading it as βAuthorβ... Story development: I only read for about 50 chapters (sometimes skipping few) to how the author writing changed. Besides kind of cliche solo adventure start for better life, I wholly enojed the development. Neutral: Updates - canβs sat much novel at the time of review is on privildge therfore author is obliged now to regular updates so full mark here. Bad: Grammar - Iβm not native speaker but I stongly hope author got editor past 50 chapter, itβs not only the missing comas and dots. Itβs more about structure of phrases and the narrator perspective - for me it was just hard to read and I couldβt enjoy it fully. Summary: Great story with nice development, but author should really use an ediotr and better synopsis of story.
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