TaintedMetal
REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE I am deeply happy that the author joined the contest. It was one of the most immersive chaps I ever been to. I was thinking it was modern but I was surprised that the novel was fantasy! The vivid narration made it cut above the rest! I didn't bore out but I enjoyed reading it until I went to another page. Seemed immersive enough for me to crave for more! Kudos and good luck on the contest. I will vote for your work for two weeks until the contest ends. Happy now? 😂
Interesting plot. Never heard of it before which is a good sign for readers to take a look at it. The flow of writing is good, decent but it can be modified. I am not much satisfied with it. The chapters are few so I cannot give a full honest review according to it but anyway, the story has potential and will do great in future. Make sure to update daily and a lil push to your writing skills. altogether, it's nice. [img=recommend]
Splendid. Gripping. Terrifyingly vivid and straight to the point. The author knows what to show and what to leave to the imagination of readers. I recommend this and all works by the author for everyone who has any taste in literature, for the pacing and the ideas presented are thrilling and I expect great things from this novel. If it will ever become a physical paperback, I want it in my book collection. Absolutely fantastic main character as well, everything is very believable and psychologically realistic.
Great story author! I am impressed with the fluidity of the plot and the action scenes. Even the dialogues are right on point. I like the world background and how well you describe it to entice the readers to know more about it. The MC is so cool and well designed. I truly immersed myself in the story, so much that I continued reading the next chapters without stopping. Fascinating and addictive. Amazing!