Reviews of The Magician Queen

The key of this novel is in the prose and humour. It will make you smile even when reading the most mundane things being done. Can't say much about the characters, for now they follow archtypes. Shameless duke, cold FMC. But the writing, ooooh the writing, and grammar for that matter. They are top notch in this here site called Qidian. I would highly recommend, and I am sure the plot will eventually shine through with it's own, unique, merits.

This is the second book I read from the author. The first one is the Queen's Wicked Deeds. And like that book, each of the Magician Queen chaps also always leave a smile to my face. Review Proper after reading the latest chapter 21. Writing Quality. It is written well plus it easy and fun to read each narratives. Stability of Updates. I look forward for more updates. Story Development. The flow of the story were not too fast and every scene were explained well. Not only that, I enjoy the things the female lead experienced and the people she met. They are all fun most of the time. Character Design. Jane or Eli, her characterization is greatly portrayed. In the QWD, Anne can be remembered when it comes to being adorable. While Eli here is quite the cunning yet funny one. "Look into my eyes..." That line will be stuck in my mind for many days 🤣. The male lead, (well, just read it if you want to know about him) but I can assure you, he's hot 😌. The other characters too are all distinct and felt so natural. World Background: It is written well. Overall, this book is a great read. If you're looking for a reincarnation story with an awesome and cool yet funny female lead, definitely read this one. Great work author! Keep it up!

The premise is nice and unique, the story telling is fresh and very comfortable to read. The very prologue you put there is very very nice as it got me hooked. So far, everything is remained mystery, kinda make one wonder what else is there. The impression and the way you introduced Jane as the lead is very nice. Story development has been good so far, the anticipation and guessing keeps me at the edge. If anything, the world building and description of things and surrounding, there's a lot of space for improvement for these as for me personally, I tend to like and need to read more of detailed descriptions to immerse myself in the story and feel the atmosphere. Overall, it's nice reading experience, good luck!

Hmmnn..starting a little dark but I won't say anything about your that but story has its own good points so keep up the good work. It look's interesting enough.,👍

The synopsis would make you read the story to check what was it about especially when you are into magical stories. The narration would hook you to read more. It is easy and enjoyable, and the story progresses smoothly.

I love that you made the female mc funny and that you made the book to be filled with humor. I absolutely enjoyed reading the first chapter. It's going to be an amazing book.

I'm guessing when the author named this book, she had herself in mind, because author—you are a MAGICIAN with words. The Sneak Peak chapter left me wanting more, and although the transition to the 1st chapter was quite sudden, it left me wondering and making theories. At the part I'm reading right now, it's been mostly world-building and character development, but it's safe to say things are progressing smoothly. I love the writing style; it's like literal magic with tinges of humour and so immersive. The mc is super cool and I like her attitude. I'd like to know more about her past and where the story is going, because currently it's a mystery hanging over our heads. My favourite part is when author describes the magic mc does in a fluent way. Apart from a few past/present tense mistakes the language is perfect. All in all, I love this book. Give this a try everyone!

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Great novel! I like the premise, and the opening was super interesting! I love the mysteries it introduced. The writing and grammar and flawless, nice job! Keep it up!

Pretty good read. First few chapters start off great with engaging narration by the protagonist. Direction wise is very clear from the beginning, where this story wants to go to, although sometimes there can be a bit too much detail within certain chapters. My only criticism would be the world, it's there but perhaps try to spice it up a bit more with what makes the setting exclusive for this novel. So far so good. Keep up the good writing.

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I can really tell that the author here has a wide imagination. The first part is interesting. I love the way how you detailed the description of the characters. I'm looking forward for your next chapters! The story has a lot of potential especially the author! Adding this to my library!

The writing style was so easy to understand, I could see the delicacy she put into writing, the first chap quite interested me, I'll be expecting more for this novel!

Nice story! You have a great imagination! I liked the story very much. First chapter was quite interesting and impressive too. Don't you dare to drop this book. Keep it up! Fighting!

Good start and fast development of events. Clear and attentive detailing of the world and descriptions of the characters are pleasant to read. I hope to meet an unexpected storyline turn and get a strong impression. Good luck author. thanks for the fantasy.

Hi, What a super creative and unique story idea. Well done thinking this up! Honestly. The story has a lot if potential. Keep on writing! Have a good day. :)