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The Mafia Game ( Hired Gun )

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kuhaku_sora
kuhaku_soraLv3kuhaku_sora

This is a fun story to read! The synopsis is great, and I love it! if the author can execute this perfectly, then you can have my 10 stars!!!! The only thing that I'd like to mention is the usage of onomatopoeia. It is okay to use it, but it would be better if you can add more depth into it. For an example the BAAANG could be improve like "I heard a blaring shot coming from elsewhere. It was like a sond of something cracking abruptly..." something like that.

Jo_J
Jo_JLv4Jo_J

A great cover page! Nicely written synopsis, which makes me curious about the content. You have an interesting concept for your story. The plot is intriguing. You're doing well! Good luck with the contest! I wish I could have more power stones ;)

Udeju
UdejuLv5Udeju

I like this! This book has a truly beautiful storyline.💕 I really like how the author depicts the emotions of the characters in each scene. It's subtle, realistic and exact. The story flows so naturally and so it's easy for readers to follow. Nice work, author.👏👏👏

Cher_Yan
Cher_YanLv1Cher_Yan

Hey author! I hope everything is going great for you. ✨I read your book and by far it’s one of the greatest works I’ve read here on Webnovel. I loved all the complexity in your characters and the way you set up your scenes. I think you are an amazing writer. 😍 You have such a way with words, and I love your writing style. Literally cannot wait to read more! If you ever have any free time, you should check out my new novel UnderHerSkin. I think you would really enjoy reading it. But if you don’t have time, I totally understand! Best of luck reading & writing!! This message turned out longer than I thought, but have a wonderful day!!!❤️❤️❤️

Samantha_R_Samuel
Samantha_R_SamuelLv1Samantha_R_Samuel

So far I am loving what I am reading, there are a few grammatical errors but all of nothing that can’t be easily corrected🤗 I would recommend this book it is quite interesting to read I think you all might agree with me💕🤗Kudos to the author

Itsuki_Suzuki
Itsuki_SuzukiLv3Itsuki_Suzuki

Writing Quality: Good and readable Updating Stability: Superb and always updated! Story Development: Nice pacing Character Design: It's nice and clean World Background: Had enough to engage more readers.

YemzKayz1303
YemzKayz1303Lv2YemzKayz1303

This is a very good story. I love how you give a detailed description of your characters and setting .However, I rated it 4.8 because of the errors . The tenses mix-up cause the grammar to be erratic. Please correct that and this will be a very catchy story. With that being said, overall you have great potential and I am going to be reading this story too. Already in my library 😃. I know that I want to journey with Ava to the end

Empzze
EmpzzeLv2Empzze

Nice work author, intriguing plot and interesting storyline, the story had me hooked in the first chapter, and I really like the pacing too. keep up the good work author i’m cheering for you and i added it to my library already.

REaper
REaperLv3REaper

Interesting storyline and unique plot, you can display a lot of character development in the novel, writing needs to be improved otherwise interesting novel, hope to see interesting updates in future

_Rain
_RainLv5_Rain

Woah!! I like it..!!! I loved the plot and the flow is smooth. The writing made it easier for me to relate to the character. Looking forward to know the mystery behind her parents. Good luck, Author❤️❤️

Author_D
Author_DLv5Author_D

Pretty good. The author really knows how to describe the rush of feelings of the characters. It's a good one to check out if you love mafia novels. Captivating plot. I like it.[img=recommend]

Princess_debbs26
Princess_debbs26Lv1Princess_debbs26

The story has me hooked. A very interesting storyline. I love Ava with the little I have read. The book is a replica of perfection 💖💖. The author did a great job of presenting Ava's emotions.

Samcrowned00
Samcrowned00Lv2Samcrowned00

Wow, this book is such a too interesting one and I am sure it will become popular in this app. Good diction. More update from the author please.

Mrtin_Monarch
Mrtin_MonarchLv1Mrtin_Monarch

This story has consistency and an incredible protagonist as well good descriptive writing, can't wait to see how it progresses, already added it to my library by the first chapter

Yashima099
Yashima099Lv1Yashima099

First of all, the book cover is superb and the synopsis was well. I like how you convey the character’s feeling and how descriptive the scence are, I’m only at the beginning and I can tell this book will be great. I’ll definitely finish and wait for the upcoming chapters! Kudos to you Author! 🥰

Riyah404
Riyah404Lv1Riyah404

This is a gripping story. A page-turner. The pacing was nice and easy to follow. You can instantly feel the MC's emotion. Great job, author! Keep on writing! :) I want to read more! :)

Theblue_wings
Theblue_wingsLv1Theblue_wings

Gosh, mind blowing plot. The book cover attracted me a lot. Am attracted most to the novels with featuring female leads with 'brave ' and 'savage ' vibes. It one of the precious gems in that field. Keep writing. ✌✌

Aisha_Jin
Aisha_JinLv2Aisha_Jin

Wow! Just great! The author have a great skill of writing! It's very unique and interesting! I add this book in my library so that I will read it slowly and learn some techniques from you. Now time for a review..... Synopsis is very interesting and plot is really very well defined. I feel like I went into the story! Great job author! Keep it up! I loved it!

Oracle_Myth
Oracle_MythLv1Oracle_Myth

The writing style is unique and the author knows how to write action scenes for sure. If you are looking for something that is action-packed and flows easily - this is for you.