This is a fun story to read! The synopsis is great, and I love it! if the author can execute this perfectly, then you can have my 10 stars!!!! The only thing that I'd like to mention is the usage of onomatopoeia. It is okay to use it, but it would be better if you can add more depth into it. For an example the BAAANG could be improve like "I heard a blaring shot coming from elsewhere. It was like a sond of something cracking abruptly..." something like that.
Hey author! I hope everything is going great for you. ✨I read your book and by far it’s one of the greatest works I’ve read here on Webnovel. I loved all the complexity in your characters and the way you set up your scenes. I think you are an amazing writer. 😍 You have such a way with words, and I love your writing style. Literally cannot wait to read more! If you ever have any free time, you should check out my new novel UnderHerSkin. I think you would really enjoy reading it. But if you don’t have time, I totally understand! Best of luck reading & writing!! This message turned out longer than I thought, but have a wonderful day!!!❤️❤️❤️
This is a very good story. I love how you give a detailed description of your characters and setting .However, I rated it 4.8 because of the errors . The tenses mix-up cause the grammar to be erratic. Please correct that and this will be a very catchy story. With that being said, overall you have great potential and I am going to be reading this story too. Already in my library 😃. I know that I want to journey with Ava to the end
Wow! Just great! The author have a great skill of writing! It's very unique and interesting! I add this book in my library so that I will read it slowly and learn some techniques from you. Now time for a review..... Synopsis is very interesting and plot is really very well defined. I feel like I went into the story! Great job author! Keep it up! I loved it!