Basso2142
First of all.... Second of all.... Third of all.... Ok......................................... Why is the prologue so long? This is my honest criticism. Take it with a grain of salt. Thanks author, I will read the book. Ok I give up, I still can’t post my review after 285 words..... Now I can??!!!!................... not yet. Oh. I forget to rate.
I am rating it 5 stars for now but this novel is still too knew to be rated on things like stability of updating and character design. Overral it shows promise, the author seems to be prioritizing Worldbuilding for now, which is a good thing, many novels skip that part and start to pull deus ex all the times the Mc is in trouble. If quality drops, then I will change my review.
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It's quite a good story. I have to admit I quite like how the story is going. There is proper development and the character doesn't just automatically know everything from the start but learn it bit by bit. There is no sudden huge info dumps which is good too. But the author hasn't posted in over a month, pls do it soon ;~;
Wonderful book! It’s refreshing to read and the world building/development of the characters really pulls you in! After reading the last chapter, I sat there day dreaming about the trios future... is that weird? Maybe... but, I can’t wait for them to step up and out. I would recommend this book for people who enjoy seeing (almost) step by step a characters progression. So far it’s definitely not one of those “gets a system; two days later, kills god” Kudos to the author! I know it’s hard to write. Especially if it’s a slow paced book, with details. Keep up the good work and thank you for sharing!