Reviews of The love package; My Darling wife and baby girl

The story is well put together and very well told. It moves along smoothly between interesting characters and captivating events. Good job author. A beautiful story. Although it’s a bit confusing as it mixes between Omnipresent and first person pov. But if that’s the writing style… interesting choice.

Hello author, I love your both works since I tried out them. But I think I like this more than the other one. The synopsis of this work is very detailed. That's so good. My first impression on your work is so good. Going to keep reading. And author keep going. You will get morr fans in the future...👍

I loved the story. The characters and plot both are captivating. Also, I liked your writing style. I am really looking forward to read more chapters. Great work author 👍

I like the story line and the characters are good. The only problem I have is all the grammatical and spelling errors in the book. I'm not sure who is talking or thinking. It goes from the ML talking in first and then third person. Sometimes it has " " to know someone is speaking and then it doesn't 🤷

This story is quite intriguing, I love the plot and it has a nice setup. Although I've only read a few chapters, I'm starting to love it. It's definitely a good read. Congratulations on a job well done👌

I really like every aspect, the characters, the story, the writing style, of course it needs a little mote updating a revision

Great story! The author have described the things so well that the story never gets boring. The world building is nice and the characters are likable, I will keep reading your story. Keep up the good work.

Well written story, some grammar and punctuation mistakes here and there. Though with some practice, stuff like that wont happen again. Just gotta reread. otherwise its a nice read. Keep writing ✍️

This book is amazing, you've really out done yourself author the characters are well written and the world is immersive, honestly a most read.

Very amazing story, fresh and interesting, You have done a great job, the characters are relatable and very well written, looking forward to more of your work

Loved the story, I will keep reading this till the end, it's interesting and somewhat mysterious at the same time, keep it up, can't wait to read more ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

I give you five stars. Your story is really nice. I hope you will do your best.[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

Nice story, incredible pace. You just want to see what is next. I like the story and character development of it. Eric was just getting all the heat and his role was quite revealing. Great work and a good narrative impact on the work!

The storyline is soo good, few chapters in and im already hooked, great job author[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Very interesting start, and the ML has a rather cute side to his character. the story has a lot of potential. But you should review it once more. Punctuations, especially for conversations, are not properly done. also some problems with the grammar. re-editing will really bring up the level of the story. Good work.

Good story, excellent cover image and synopsis, the story is quite entertaining with good characters and good plot development, keep up the good work.

Author, I greet you. It's a fascinating story, but it sinks under various flaws. Of course, this is my subjective point and I don't want to offend you. I recommend rephrasing sentences with a large number of pronouns "I", and also adding quotation marks for direct speech. Perhaps at the beginning of the story you should add a brief reference, "Who is who", so that later there will be no confusion. Who is Andrey? He's the boss's assistant. Clear. And who is this. Kelvin. Okay. Thanks for the story. It is clear that you have made best effort to write it. I will definitely finish it. :) Respectfully, L. Machen.

The buildup of the story is good. It gets you hooked. The characters are also interesting. So far, I have read all the chapters and looking forward for the coming ones. Keep up the good work 😊

Thiiiiiiis boooook iiiiiis amaaaazing! and it's a must read book. Good grammars and synopsis. I recommend this book for other readers. Can't wait to read more chapters

This will be an exciting read, I am just starting my read, but I can't look away from my screen. I think it is going to be fated love.[img=recommend][img=recommend]