The Lost Marines

I am a new author, just trying to write something, there is no set release schedule. Honestly, I really liked reading novels on the website but I dropped so many of them because I thought that there were too many loose ends, or things just got too silly/stupid to make sense to me personally so I am writing something to suit my tastes. This story is going to start off a little fast because there is a lot of hope I have for this novel. The story starts with Jason Kruger and Evan Gibbs. They start out as guests in a Marine recruiting station in Pueblo, Colorado, USA 2010. They will have fast initial development to start the story, I may return to add to the beginning later on. But they develop into Marines until they consider their morals and during that period of self-discovery they fight in a life-changing assignment that leads them to the beginning of the story, lost. And if you think of any potential names of the characters please comment, I am terrible at picking names, also include some character traits, it will make writing the characters more interesting.