The Lost Magic in Fairy Tail

first time author and my very first novel plsss don't comment about bad words cause I have a few friends that quit writing cause of bad review and a lot of basher ... they can't understand the life of being an author and there work... plssss english is not my language but I tried google translate ｡◕‿◕｡ so don't hurt me to much I accept advice so let's try to help each other ty btw the real sypnosis is Chapter 1 including the prologue