DanTheStoryMan
I think, looking at the premise, it reminds me of an xianxia story simillar to I think stellar transformations with the sort of ray of power, but also I think a few other somewhat popular stories have a similar start. It seems like it has potential, and a somewhat clear scaling of power and hints towards different archetypes the main character will progress through. Overall I think it has potential but will follow for the next few chapters in order to have a solid review.
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