The Legendary Tales of Indra

I've never really read a book like this but I do like the plot. Especially the fact that it's supernatural. Keep it up author you are doing a good job.

Great writing. I can easily visualize the scenes inside my head. I can also think of it in an anime adaptation. Somehow the fight scene at the start reminds me of Dragon Ball Z. I like the flow of events and the author's writing style. I think it's better than most that I have encountered in WN. Keep it up, author. You have a great story here.

Your story is interesting and has potential. Your world-building is really good. I find your style of writing has a little bit of comedy to it while keeping it at a style that would get readers engaged. You do have grammar mistakes, especially on parts that need commas. In the beginning, when you talked about Dark Wolf Faction, you kept lower casing ‘Faction,’ but when you did “Dark Faction,” you uppercase it. I won’t lie, at times I got lost and confused because the story will go fast-paced, but at the same time, not. I would have to go back and see if I missed anything. Other than that, your story is really interesting and engaging, keep up the good work!

Wonderful just love it, I will not explain long for all people here already said I want to express and Is really good your story the character is really well formed it showed very well I love it every thing is good, sorry I can't focus on grammars for English is not my first language your story is really good keep going author-nim <3

Very nice story! It has a rich background description and the conversations are very good. The characters, main hero and main villain, are also well done, especially since they start off at that 'overpowered' level instead of starting off at the level of a worm, lololol. Continue writing, dear Author!

Great! Just great as I can say. You gave a solid fist bump for the character background. Makes me anticipate what he can do more and what can he make me see. Explore more.

Good novel. Has a better world-building than some of the novels that I read. Would continue reading this so keep up the good work! I Really like it.

Great world-building there. Nice description. The first chap already in action that makes it a strong intro. Interesting good vs evil story. Keep it up author😉👍👍👍👍👍

The story is a different start from your traditional crawl to power. I can feel the scenes that I read and the background is described well. This story has a lot of potential and I'm excited to keep reading.

I think this is a great story! There are a lot of things you can potentially improve in your writing but other than that I think this is an amazing book!

The synopsis is pretty crisp, good, the writing holds to the imagination and visualisation process ... Looking forward to this project.[img=exp]

It's a pretty good read. The environment and story telling is done quite well and gives a good scope of the power Indra has. Despite a few errors in grammar, I was held by the plot you obviously wanted to tell. I hope to see you expand your field of writing.

First several chapters are pretty good, I enjoy the plot and hope for the story to excel. I'm glad that there are plenty of chapters to read and continue which I'll do during my free time. I'm glad I was able to find this. I wish this person luck.

Not my usual type of story but I love the characterisation of lead roles.Definitely It is going to be boom😍😍I must suggest this book to you guys.❤️Waiting for more....

Very good story so far and the way you described the situation was amazing good job on your first novel this is a really good book keep going and never give up

The story is very interesting. There is no point in the story where it gets boring. It always keeps you on the edge! The plot has action, adventure and suspense which I love and I would recommend this book to anyone.

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Great job overall! To readers, if you are looking for intense battles and dialogue, this story is totally for you! Writing Quality 4/5 (Would honestly have given 4.5/5, but Webnovel doesn't let me): The writing quality does not impede with reading the story at all, but there are very little things here and there with comma usage (you tend to have some dangling modifiers, unnecessary commas, comma splice issues). The overall descriptions you write and the scenes you create are fantastic though. Stability of Updates 5/5: Can't really speak for it so hehhh enjoy the 5. Story Development 5/5: Surprisingly action-packed and swift. Like I was pretty taken aback when it was like hey! 500 years has passed! But that's definitely a plus in this genre. Character Design 5/5: Very heroic overall tbh, and I really do enjoy the emphasis on the childhood friends aspect with trust and betrayal, etc. World Background 5/5: Very descriptive overall. Good luck! (Also realized I forgot to make clear the 5/5 for design and stuff so ahaha reposted)