Elyon
Shameless Author here giving my novel a 5 star rating. This is my first novel in this platform and I hope that you will like the story that is born from my hopes, dreams, and aspirations. English is not my first language, so you are bound to see a lot of grammar mistakes. However, I will do my best and hopefully, I will get better as I write. Feel free to talk to me and leave your comments behind. If you really like the story, please leave a review. Without further ado, come! Enter a fantasy world filled with adventure, comedy, romance, drama, and suspense. A story that will bring a smile on your face when you need it the most. Welcome to the world of the Legendary Baka Warriors!
Despite what the thing says, I made it well past chapter 1. I know you say English isn't your first language, but you write in English better than most native speakers I've read on this site, so well done. Your command of the language is excellent, and you should be proud of yourself for that. I don't know if you meant this story as a parody of the "arrogant young master" trope or not, but this reads like the best parody of that trope I've seen on this site. It's hilarious. I genuinely enjoyed reading this, and that trope makes me want to hurt someone any other time I've read it, so well done!
Legendary Baka Warriors, a novel filled with humour that would make you laugh till you cry. The interactions between the MC and the others are sometimes silly but, don't just assume this to be a comedy novel. Each interaction has a suble meaning behind them that would send a moral to the readers. The interactions also display human psychology in the clearest manner. The author has done well to bring out all flavours of human emotions with a pinch of humour sprinkled upon them ( Sometimes a dash of humour, but, it's good for your heart).
Good novel right here folks. A promising beginning, with much shenanigans going on in this novel. The main author behaves like a young master, which is entertaining to read. Not only that, this novel does not have jarring disconnects. The pace of writing is very paced and smooth, balancing the line between being too plain and too filler like. Overall, 5/5 would recommend.