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As of this review I'm all caught up to the story at ch45 and its great, real steady paced and love how the story and characters are introduced, nice to see an mc that has to struggle but I kinda feel like this part of the story I'm at where a war is breaking out feels kinda rushed but not really, don't know how to explain it, a bit too early I think but I would definitely recommend to readers, I don't have any real complaints except that grammar or spelling can be off at times but that's a rarity lol me nitpicking now.
It's a awesome novel. The story is developing every well and interestingly. The development of character and introduce of new characters are well presented. It's every interesting to read . The only drawback back is we have to wait for 2 days for new chapter but it's worthy to wait for 2 days. It's not a drawback though. Well it's getting 2days to update new chapter is that the author priorities on quality rather than quantity. I'm suggesting this novel to new and existing reader those who are not yet reader to read.
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Honestly speaking, author you need to redo your synopsis because its really bad. It doesnt even tell you what the story will actually be about. If I wasnt bored out of my mind just clicking random books that I might like soley based on the title, I wouldnt have even tried this if I hadnt read the other ones in the newbie power rankings I interested in. Plus I only tried this because of the word Tamer in the title and lack of books. As for the actual review, this one was difficult for me as it wasnt like BAD but it was really hard to get into the story. This is because of the first chapter, it felt like it couldve been way better for a starting chapter. Unlike some of the other books I tried that had like actual flaws I could easily flame, this is more to do with your current writing style, which isnt that surprising since I saw u put that this your first book. Only way for that to get better is to read and write a lot more. Because of these 2 things I think are the reason why no1 reads or more so vote this novel. Im also guessing that u review swapped as every1 elses ratings are practically 5 stars while theres like no veiws. I dont like those types of people but whatever, compared to spam and alt accs its way better. The story starts off with MC transmigrating into a hopeless tamer who had died trying to tame monkeys. His parents are legendary talents but not in taming. MC coming from a taming family felt discrace so decided to become a tamer forcefully even though his talent at it is trash. He also has a sister. I only read 3 chaps before I dropped, but the novel's content/style was way too consistent making it dull. With it continuing for 3 chaps I gave up. Again this cant really be fixed without reading good books u like and analyzing what they do and writing more. Its different for every1 but I improved by making a new story and dropping my old one every few dozen chaps to fx my past mistakes and try something else, not the story, but the way I write. Yes my profile only has 3 novels, but I wrote some on other accs while for now Im just stockpiling and also planning for amazon. U just gotta self analayze and try to see what you are doing wrong / right. Review swaps will tell u jack and only r a film that inflate each others egos. Also if u delete me Ill be back as I hate those authors :)