Ryusenka
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I really liked the different vision from other DxD stories, with the protagonist training and living among the Yokai faction, a shame that everything was poorly applied and too superficial to arrest anyone, but what ruined it for me was the fact that he taught his skills to everyone as if he were handing out sweets. It's pure naivety on the part of the protagonist, I don't particularly like this type of story. But this is just my particular and sincere taste for this review, in general the story could be good for you, my dear companions.
Mc cringe, naive, pathetic, fool, fool, dumb, stupid. this novel got nothing to entertain no more. I mean as you read more chapters, he barely make progress, he can kill or seal orochi but not even leave a scratch on susanoo. I mean at least put some damage on susanoo but nah, also he's telling yasaka about the system and his reincarnation, pretty stupid move honestly. irl If you did, you dead even it's supernatural, why because even the god want to know the secret of reincarnation to reincarnated a person for his/her slave, army etc
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author everthing will fall into place for you but not now it will slowy come to and considering the story dont study useless bad revives all you need to do stay focus, set your goal, and reach your goal and everything will be find but it will take time and be rough at the beginning but later on it will be fine
Itβs good but I donβt like it there isnβt enough information giving to stuff such as will he start turning into a dragon thereβs other stuff at best I would rate this novel a 4 but since there isnβt really any information other then heβs weak witch he shouldnβt be since wind dragon slayer magic has the easiest dragon slayer magic that can harness dragon force also dragons in fairytail are all above the heveanly dragon stage or on it since igneel was able to destroy mountains like it was nothing with a claw of his finger a kingdom would be destoryed they could have destroyed the world but didnβt Albion and draigg struggle to do these feats
its quite clear that the writer is amateur and write his MC based on wish fulfillment. like normal human being, the MC kind and samaritan to everyone else to a fault. its like good man giving money to beggar but instead of money he giving out power. very naive like high school boy. well he is still better human than issei ig. also the author dont know proper english of some indonesian terms like 'dukun' which is untranslated indonesian language. in case anyone wondering, dukun in english is shaman or witch doctor. anyway overall the fic is mid. not good but not awful either. it's boring tho
It was good for a while. It was interesting, but it read like Chinese Cultivation novle. he keeps getting stronger and stronger, which is cool. But he doesn't do anything even after he finishes his evolution. He doesn't really do anything, just more lists of things he's doing and going to do. And, the whole dimension thing messed me up. He was supposed to be opening the underworld to a dimension that was gonna house his faction. He had a base in the Underworld. And then he had a pocket dimension. and dimension he was gonna go into for his faction from the Underworld. In the pocket dimension he was creating had a world all in itself filled with origin seed energy. Then he was gonna use a gate to the Earth from the dimension He created for his faction. It just sounds all f****** convoluted. It's too much. Basically, the cool factor wore off of him getting stronger. He didn't do anything with hid strength. So while it was cool, there was nothing other than a cool factor once the cool factor wore off it was boring. The novel became boring.
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I'll give this book 3 stars for all I want in a story. at first it was going good, but after it started going downhill. for the title lazy system it really doesn't apply to me since the host or Mc is doing this work left and right like his fight with the Evil dragon was good but could have been better and should have focused on training like I don't know a training montage because if the guy wants to be with Yasaka he need strength and power I feel like people forget this when writing story about DxD that might makes right.the other stuff is fine but needs more work. as for the sharing or telling people his powers I get its good to be honest on some stuff but I felt like he should have kept most of his power and magic a secret like his Dragon slayer magic or his Universal breathing techniques. since what's the point on having trump cards when you show them left and right like it's a piece of candy. theirs so many threats on DxD that I don't know why the Mc/Author forgot or not just mention it like his he stupid or wants to be killed. the world has beings that can destroy countries or the world and his out their playing school boy plus his human still is he? going to turn into a Dragon or what will his race be since if the man is going to get together with Yasaka who can live for as long as she wants the man needs to turn into something that has long life span. I get the Sage mode or arts will give him a long life but for how long? exactly it's a good story but he needs process, and theirs this hint of naivety that I don't like about stories the guy knows his in a dangerous world but doesn't improve him self more and get that needed strength so he can be lazy.sigh sorry about tye ranting all and all it is a good story needs work here and there but yeah so keep up the good work
Why is are guys saying mc is naive and he shouldn't have taught them his technique, I haven't seen anything that makes him naive and I can literally see no consequences of him teaching the technique, only benefits -------------------+---------------+++++++++------------------------------------------66----------------_-----------------------------------------------------------------------------+------------