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LOVE097
LOVE097Lv4LOVE097

Hello... The concept is new and the character of the main lead is good. The writing is consistent....keep up the good work author😊😊😊😊😊😊

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SolAce
SolAceLv3SolAce

This is an honest review, so I’m going to point out several problems your readers may have with your book. 1. Punctuation and grammar: This is the main problem I have when I’m reading 2. Paragraph separation: You need to separate dialogues by different people; it makes it easier for the reader to see who exactly is talking and to prevent confusion. I would suggest cropping up paragraphs into at most 3-4 sentences, so that other readers may comment on that specific paragraph. 3. Character design: While I do get what this character is a soldier who seems to have lost everything, I feel like he doesn’t have enough character to be “alive”. Maybe it’s the grammar that’s making me unable to immerse myself fully, but I think he needs to have a defining characteristic that makes him feel more real. 4. Story Development & World Background: I can probably see that this is a survival in the mutant world type of story which reminds me of apocalypse type genre, but I think again that this world has to have something original or unique that makes it stand from other similar novels. But don’t get discouraged author ! We all start from somewhere, and time and effort will never cheat you. I can probably help you with the first and second problems I have mentioned, so if you need my help, just respond to my review. Other than that, best of luck to you author, and I hope you continue to write more !

LinYang
LinYangLv2LinYang

Overall, pretty good start. Author's writing quality has improved, I see. The world seems quite interesting. Looking forward to see what happens to the characters. Keep writing, author, you will improve!

xiaohai_23
xiaohai_23Lv11xiaohai_23

It's a nice and original story. Through the chapters, the author gives you information about the small details of the MC's survival, such as how much of what did he found and he's going to do with that. It makes you immerse in the story and make calculations as well as if you're there sharing those same resources. Overall, the grammar can be improved. I suggest to the author to check for typos and punctuation issues.

MistressUnderworld
MistressUnderworldLv2MistressUnderworld

I love thriller and stories with twists that keeps me on my toe. Your story is interesting, but a little bit fast paced. And some grammatical errors here and there. Nothing crucial enough to bother me, but definitely noticeable. A little bit of improvement and proof-reading will go a long way. Best of luck!

Gery_
Gery_Lv14Gery_

Amazing story with nice characters and world. The grammer is great and the pacing is also good, so sofar amazing. It has a really great potential, so I can easily recommend this to anyone.

iam_adh
iam_adhLv2iam_adh

I love the concept of this story . By the first episode I was hooked. I had so many questions by the end of the first chapter that it made me want to come back. Now, not to be rude or anything, but as a suggestion try to reread and fix typos . I've also noticed how sometimes the translation was a bit off and how some sentences started with a lowercase letter. Besides those problems, I'm really invested in this story. Keep it up author-nim!

SnowPenguin
SnowPenguinLv3SnowPenguin

This is one of the best translations that I've seen, all set in a unique world with descriptions and worldbuilding that just stands out as one of the best ones, with the great atmosphere and dialogue from the characters.

YennuiXiel
YennuiXielLv2YennuiXiel

Ahhh the story is nice and I remembere my first time also writing a story I am just like you too! though don't worry i like the story and Aja Aja fight fight to us my co-beginner writer hahahhaah

Jerry55
Jerry55Lv10Jerry55

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QuietScreamer
QuietScreamerLv6QuietScreamer

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