Let me just say I am rooting for Adam and Jess. But I feel sorry for Zain. The theme of the story is brilliant, a little cliche, but all in all its very good. I really like Adam's character development. The story is really easy to read. I just hope that you my dear author won't break Adam and Jessy apart! OR ELSE!!! hehe.. Kidding! :) Goodluck Author! More updates please!
This is my second review for this work. And I post it not to rate the writing quality or stability of updates, but to say a big 'thank you' to the Author! Lizabelle, I like your novel very much! Please, continue writing your story. It's wonderful! I know that writing is hard work but you do well. Always looking forward to the new chapters! Keep it up!
Welp!! This is a fantastic novel, if I say so, author. Leaving, the minor mistakes it's all good to go. Just wondering why u made avolune for each chapter tho. I can see the usefulness of it, as I'm a writer myself but it's weird. Other than that, it feels very much like a Hollywood movie about vampires. Good job and best of luck!!
Just leave the mension Adam.I want to see how you could survive in your second life. It seems that you still have your power as a vampire. But how strong your power is...of course it depends on how the writer plots your in the next chapter. I really like the novel. It's not only entertaining but also emusing.. please give me a longer and cooler chapter
Over this novel is going in a good direction. There are sentence structure issues, some sentences are also incomplete, wrong use of 'her'...From reading, it looks to be written in the present tense. However, there are also some errors with the use of the past tense. I like the plot and the general idea of this novel. With some editing, this would be an even greater novel. Good going author. Not your typical vampire stories...give this one a read.
It's a cute story. I like it. I like the vampire vaccine it's not something I've personally read of before when reading vampire stories. I think it's very unique! I thought it was pretty crafty of him when he was checking her out in chapter 7 and when she asked him he was like, "I'm just looking at your pretty roses." LOL!!! I think there are a few grammar errors here and there but overall it's good. With more work and practice I'm sure it'll turn into a really good story.