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REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE I am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) 😉
That coldness of politics reflects the atmosphere of the story. Neve Rosentine is an already interesting character and the world around her feels real and exciting. Certainly a story that I want to dive further into when I have the change. With the great writing style that sets up the atmosphere just right, great flow in dialogue, I as a writer can certainly learn techniques from this. Only 3 chapters in and The Lady of Ice and Snow has such high potential. Thank you for showing me this work! Good luck and keep pushing forwards!
Hey! Beautiful cover, btw. Anyways, here is what I thought: This book is by far it’s one of the greatest works I’ve read here on Webnovel. I loved all the complexity in your characters and the way you set up your scenes. I think you are an amazing writer. 😍 You have such a way with words, and I love your writing style. Literally cannot wait to read more! If you ever have any free time, you should check out my new novel UnderHerSkin. I think you would really enjoy reading it. But if you don’t have time, I totally understand! Best of luck reading & writing!! This message turned out longer than I thought, but have a wonderful day!!!❤️❤️❤️