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The Kingdom Of The Saiyans

ThePrsn

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ThePrsn
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This is more of an apology post rather than a review. I accidentally voted for my own novel, and I swear, it was indeed an accident. I couldn't live with myself if I left something so shameless unacknowledged. I considered deleting this entire novel and re-uploading it, but apparently you can't do that, so I'll just leave this post here in the hopes of balancing things out. I sincerely apologise for shamelessly voting for myself, I promise that it was an accident and that I will NEVER do such a thing again. This is NOT a review of the Novel, it is a review of my horrible and shameless act of voting for myself, by accident or not, it was NOT a cool thing to do. I hope this clears things up, and I hope you enjoy reading my novel, I will try to write chapters worth your time. Thank you for taking your time to read this, and have a wonderful day! Yours Truly, The Prsn.

ThePrsn
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I wrote a kind of pretentious review a year ago, so I thought I'd take the hit and balance my thoughts and scores out right here as suggested by a reader (thanks for the idea 'Kurosis'). I'm fairly confident in most aspects of my story, but they'll always be 4 out of 5 for me, since I think there'll always be room to improve and have more fun with what I'm writing. The updates aren't stable, and I'm sorry about that, they've improved recently, so I'll mark it down as decent, but I really don't know how much I can improve it with my circumstances. The world is the Dragon Ball world... Thanks Toriyama-sensei! Thanks for reading guys, sorry for being pretentious before, I hope ya'll like reading my stuff. Yours Truly, ThePrsn.

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This is something so good and interesting. It baited me right from the synopsis as a DB fan as well. Writing - I'll give you a perfect score on this. Excellent prose, great grammar, and the connection between the author and the reader felt real Stability - its new so I hope to see this through Development - nice pace, not too fast, not too slow. Just the right timing and creativity in the first few chapters Characters - I vibe with Reggie. The rest feel alive too. World - A+ for the vividness of it all Keep going.

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Highly recommended for those that are into the anime or manga scene in general. The story draws you in from the very first chapter, not to mention the description used to interact with the audience! 10/10 easily!