Future Masterpiece and Hidden Gem is an understatement for this novel, let’s go.
Writing Quality: Regular. It has several typos here and there, it has forgotten words such as indefinite article but the delivery is fresh, there are a lot of dialogues and paragraphs aren’t that much loaded.
Update Stability: No chap for two days so, let’s say average.
Story Development: great development in every sense of the word. There are great battles, missions, something to accomplish and an end goal, the perfect recipe for development.
Character Design: imI like every single character presented, I don’t dare call myself a Tekken fan but I like it, I don’t know much about KOF or SF characters but I’ve come to like them in this novel with just few chapters.
World Background: Proper geographic information delivered, proper weather descriptions, a lot of locations for different character interaction, 5 stars.
Now my personal opinion: I absolutely love this novel, if there is something that it is lacking it would be drama but that’s also optional.
I love Roxy and Poison so dam much, I hope you give them a better role in the future, many might think that they’re just sluts and that I should be crazy for loving them but not at all. I love how they developed, how they were willing to change their motives, their way of dressing and their way of behaving just to get in his heart, regardless of their initial motives, sht I just love them.
I love that you gave every character a proper background or at least didn’t discard it from the original, and many pairings, I’m sad that King has a boyfriend cause I liked her quite a bit but well such is life, I like that you limit the amount of girls that he will get, there’s a lot of variety so he can’t get them all. Just hope you put Lily and Nina from Tekken and I’m happy.
Love the fighting scenes, there is actual rivalry, I like that he’s getting subordinates, like him making his own Saibatsu one way or another. I like that he’s not fully OP and that makes it so that fights are interesting.
The lemons are scarce but when you write them boe, are you FanHarem’s disciple? That’s the way it should be, not lemon every chap, but a quality and meaningful one every ten or 20 chaps. Girls aren’t easy and don’t just surrender themselves, I mean poison and roxy did but that’s just how they are.
I see so much potential in this novel. The only thing I don’t like honestly is that you mixed Kengan, I believe it’s unnecessary, there’s enough story and characters with KOF, Tekken and Naruto.
Hope the best and you’ll be getting my stones often.
Greetings
