Septic_Red
This gets five stars from me for a number of simple reasons: - The writing is on point here. Transitions are smooth and nothing is rushed - Doesn't rush too much despite being a short story. The writing allows the build up as to what would happen next - Got some good showing and imagery going on. - This is a finished and completed work.
WOW. Simply gnarly and terrorsome. I'd loveeee if i could see an action sequence or much more if you have a good plot in mind. I LOVE IT. Wtch the promised neverland, its about a farm for human children raised by women who tell the kids they're going to get adopted, but inturn end up meeting terrible fates because there are no parents. There are monsters that eat humans just like lifestock! This is a amazing plot, love the repetition, I'd loveeeee to know moree.