Im not good with english but I can confirm that the plot is better than in another world with my smartphone.
I am not professional nor good at writing if someone is willing to edit anything to make it better just post it in comments I would try to do it
It's not good, not bad. It's a good time killer. Didn't read much yet but I like it so far. This help me began writig a lot.
The main character is very interesting too.
