Craig214
Wow, this is a nice action story with good pace. The action scenes in the first chapter is nicely written, author kudos for that. And Logan, his character set up has left me completely in love with him. I badly want to know more about him, him fighting with cards just makes it more cool. And the fl is nice also, Nice story.
This book was suprising for a genre that often dissapoints. The writer clearly has a talent, and the scenes are fast paced and fluid. the only issue I have is sometimes details are over looked (girl is shot - author doesnt tell us her body slum** to the floor), and I felt that at times the wording can be confusing. Apart from that bravo, clearly a talented writer with a knack for the job, can't wait to read more
The writing skill is impressive, how the author explains the fight scenes is admirable for as the reader you can see the image depicted by the author. And I love the whole fight arena sequel it reminds me of "The hunger games". It's a unique book to read and there are few books like this one that draws the reader into the Authors world. Keep on writing, loving it so far.
Wow, I gotta say that's one way to grab people's attention. From the fast chapter, the fights scenes are paced well and keeps the readers at the edge of their seats. And the first time I envisioned Logan he kinda reminded me of Hisoka from HxH, which is a pretty awesome thing! congratulations to the author you deserve all the support your getting.