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The Impossible Fate That Leads To A God Of A New World

LuciferVermillion

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  • Updating Stability
  • Story Development
  • Character Design
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LuciferVermillion
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Hello, the author here. I will be updating every Sunday, 12pm. Obviously, at my time zone. If you like my work, add in to your library and share it! Here's an illustration for the book cover:

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DemonsDescent
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Reveal spoiler

Everythinger_Kumar
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This is probably the highest score that I've given to anyone. Like honestly, you deserve it. I'm starting to like the first person genres now that I've read yours. It almost makes me feel as if I'm reading Percy Jackson once again. Ahh... nostalgia hit me hard. Your writing has a kind of smooth flow to it, which I'm jealous about (you should teach me how to pull those off). The character design is awesome. And since we've come to characters, I must admit, the front cover looks sick! And you've given the details in an apt manner, or so to say, not too much nor not too little. I think this balance enhances your plot more. If I have to relate to your book, I would say, Sword art online written by Rick Riordan. Overall, I really enjoyed reading most of the chapters. Good luck!

DragonSlayer11
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nice update days๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜

Kenneth_Herrig
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Its like the author just writes down half the story without any concern for how the readers are supposed to get the full picture. A poor immitation of a magic school anime.

DaoistQl11pjCieL
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I never doubt that this book is not good coz it's so perfect for my taste! The author is really born talented! Though, I'm a stranger, I am proud of the author's success. I hope for this book to be on top and be popular among books all over the world! Fighting! โคโค

Kw0z
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Is there inยขest? I apogolize for asking this question in a review, but someone else asked this as well, and you didnโ€™t really give a clear answerโ€ฆ

xPonGx
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What are the Tags for the genres of this story, thank you.๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ‘€๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ‘€๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ‘€๐Ÿฅด๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿฅด๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿฅด๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ•๐Ÿฅด๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ•๐Ÿฅด๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ•๐Ÿ˜ฎ๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜‚โ˜บ๏ธ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ™ƒ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜‡โ˜บ๏ธ๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜š๐Ÿ˜‹๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿคช๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคจ๐Ÿง

Bernard_Nutsuvi
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By the way Great story but I would recommend adding the harem to the list of people he will end up with in the end.[img=recommend][img=recommend]

LuciferVermillion
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Hello, this section is only meant for readers to enjoy novel's illustrations drawn by yours truly, me, Lucifer Vermillion. Please do not comment anything in this review, I don't want it to be flooded. However, you could like the illustrations as many times as you want. These illustrations are also copyrighted, it's fine if you would want these as a wallpaper, but please don't use it for profit. As an illustrator, I especially hate those who stole other people's hardly drawn work for profit or attraction. I have seen some authors using other illustrator's artworks from manga, novel or even illustration. Especially Tokita Ohma from Kengan Ashura /Kengan Omega in some works I had seen in the past. Don't think it's a small problem, frustration will really build up if you saw someone using your work without your agreement. If anyone would want some illustration for some scenes in my work, you could request it at the first review (the one that was flooded with comments). Don't worry, I would definitely spend time to read if you want. Just a reminder, please don't comment here.

Rot123456
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best story 10/10 just needs some dialogue fixing and spelling mistakes also monologues are too big and author gets distracted on each monologues but it gets better

ShadowNovaS
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After reading 20 chapters of your story~ First chapters are big headache. Your style is something hard for me. I don't talk about grammar or something... Later - story is really better to read. But still something tickles me. But hey! Idea is very good and I wish you the best! This is something fresh for sure. Just without first chapters.

Stardreamer12
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Your book was really good; it provided detailed descriptions that allowed me to imagine the scenes in your story. I also appreciated your clear writing style, which helped me to understand the plot. Overall, it was a great read, although I found the name of the main character a bit long. By the way, I particularly enjoyed the way you described Shiroha in one of the chapters. Your description was so vivid that I felt like I could already picture her appearance

prajnya_shriyan
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I've read till Chapter- 3.7 and I have enjoyed so far. Will continue reading. I have given you 4.8 stars just because of the updating stability. I know you are keeping busy but try to update at least 2 chapters in a week. That would be easier for readers to remember what happened in the last chapter and we don't have to read it again and again. Overall it's a really good novel. Adding it to the library right away.

OtakuGamerGirlTA
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I think you've got a really interesting story here, so keep up the good work! I think being a little more descriptive with certain scenes would be helpful, and more frequent updates would be nice, but overall, you're doing great.

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0Dev_Das0
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Have just discovered this story and I love it! The writing style is nice, so the reading comes easy, I do not stumble but the words flow naturally, which is important for a book to have. Powerful language and character development! Recommend! [img=recommend]

NAHYAN09
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Everything is excellent so far. The only problem with the novel is that the updates are slow but since the chapters are big and the author might have IRL stuff to do so I won't complain much. I also like the fact that the author makes the illustrations by himself. The illustrations are amazing. Keep up the work author.

Malicious_Arthur
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The character design of Lucifer is an exceptional view in my perspective as I enjoy his indulging actions. The novel is a good one if I say so.

Bright_Gabriel_9341
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My gosh, your writing is explicit and the background is well explained. The characters were well taken care of. Your command of language is impeccable... I will save and read from the app to give chapter and paragraph reviews..nice job...