Reviews of The Immortal Player
The Immortal Player
RDream
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An interesting story with a slow start that picks up and runs well. Currently on Ch 84 and only had one scene with a 'clique OP moment due to plot logic' however, can't wait for the next release as story is amazing so far and can't put down. Keep it up Master Author *Salute* !
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Writing quality is dull and boring. There's unneeded censoring, improper use of pronouns, and unappealing descriptions for skills and ****. Story development is terrible, it's going at a steady pace but the obvious plot armor is too blinding to look at. There is absolutely no balancing and stats along with skills are just randomly slapped down while the author thinks, "No one is going to bother to calculate anything, so it's fine. I'm a genius for making mobs so overpowered that a lot of people are in an endless loop of crippling their accounts." Character design.. Oh man, oh ****... Main character is trash for someone who has 7 years of experience while also running a guild/team/whatever you want to call it. I thought, "C-tier? Must of been really behind." But it's quite obvious that the main character is a fucking retard who made his way from sheer luck. Regarding NPCs and other players, their personality and appeal is just as worse as the main character; they're just really stale fluff to add onto the MC's sub-par design. World background. Almost non-existent. Locations names are just dropped down in text, there is no descriptions to build up on the scenery. "It's a cave. It's a forest. It's a road. It's a village." I wouldn't care if the main character was absolute trash if there was an actual world out there and not some **** that was thrown down on the spot without any details. Final verdict - Not even worth to read as a throwaway. And why the **** are you putting so much time into explaining the benefits of the beta when he's going to lose everything when the game officially launches? Please improve the world development, a story isn't a story without an actual world to it.
like it so far hope u dont drop it and continue to improve it :) hehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehheheh
this is my first time to make a review about this novel becaus I find it interesting way and its Filipino point of view not in Chinese I'm sorry if you are a half Chinese and half Filipino something like that.. the sentence that make 3rd person view is really awkward becaus I don't know if the mc or the narrator is speaking or thinking I find it difficult to me read that all and I full support of this novel and author too
Being an avid reader on this platform, and video games being one of my favorite genres, I do have to say that is is one of the better books here. The pros: the world background, and the characters are quite nicely developed. Although the reincarnation trait is very overused, it is implelemted nicely in this book. Another thing is that the game also has solid mechanics, no logic holes in it, at least none that are huge. Cons: the start of the book is rather slow and chaotic, and might be hard to push through. There are small grammatical errors, and some logic holes. However, none of the cons are very large. In summary, this is a rather good book, I encourage you to read it, and I encourage the author to continue writing and updating this story.
Couldn't get too far into the story. nor did I get to experience too much. I might come back to it in the future, but until the author gets an editor to fix the really bad grammar, I can't stand to read it. I looked forward to reading it, after seeing the synopsis, but when reading it makes my head hurt, I refuse to continue reading it.
So let’s review this story, I’ll be honest the story ain’t exactly groundbreaking in any way, however I still do enjoy it a bit. My main problems with the story mostly comes from the lack of editer, I’m not sure if it’s just me, but I feel the stories writing feels incredibly hectic at points, not in a fast paste way, but just jumping really quickly between various actions The characters are shockingly more fleshed out than your typical wuxia novel which is honestly surprising to me so kudos to you on that Game mechanics are iffy at best and awful at worst, I generally dislike the perma death game thing that a few novels have, xp distribution is also a bit questionable. I feel like author could have benefitted from just making it a system novel with a gate system like “super gene” My best suggestion to you author would be find a friend you trust to give an honest opinion and make him proof read it a little bit
This is actually a really good story so far >~< when I started it last night, I genuinely didn't think much of it, due to the grammatical errors and such, as well as the fact that the other 2 webnovels I've read were both really well known with few errors and stuff. But, I find this one just as interesting and in-depth ^-^ 10/10 would recommend
