**** so quick thing, my stories are not good and i mostly just write them when i have free time so its like a lot now because of ms rona but they aren't that good cause they are thrown together, and ps this statement is not really thought out so its shouldn't be counted as anything, well i use commas A LOT, cause i don't really know where to put them, kinda writing this cause I'm bored and have nothing better to do than work on my typing skills, so don't know why i put so i just felt like it... i want to know peoples opinion on this story, like
how should it go
how do write better
what charactorsshould i include
should i make her keep her secret for long
or shouldi let them become close really fast then let her new pack find out
i have a lot of ideas and i don't know where to start
someone tell me their idea
i am on here at night most but sometimes during breakfast after a dream i had
this story was basted on a dream i had about the shy girl falling for the teacher and the teacher falling for her
should i make a different story where she is the teachersand he is the old vampire
any questions you have you can ask
pleasehelp me with this story so it is better
sounds bad that i am asking for help from someone reading but ahhhhh
im not done but this is enough of me asking for ideas
i know that like no one is going to commentate alone read this
so have fun with whatever you're reading