The Harem King

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To put it simply this novel is bad. Jumps from one thing to another making it very confusing by that I mean he can be doing something in school but the next ch he is at his home eating breakfast or something like that. Second of all the mc. Damn the dudes annoying as ****, laughing like an idiot all the time and so on. Then theres world building... well what can i say theres bearly any of that if any. Character development is non existent as well. To put in simpler terms, DON'T READ IT IF U VALUE U'R BRAIN CELLS!!!

I have a question for the author how did you manage to get 1 million views its so hard getting people 2 your page even if story is good. I want more people to visit my book no matter what.

Okay, so, I promised to be genuine in my review, so here goes- You are obviously having a whole lot of fun writing this story, and that's great. Grammar-wise, I can actually not find a whole lot of problems, which is rare for this site, so good on you. That said, I'm having a hard time following the plot, and I'm struggling to figure out the MC's motivation or mindset, and I have no idea at all why he keeps laughing out loud randomly. This story feels a lot like a zany sugar high- lots of enthusiasm, but not a tremendous amount of focus or depth. It is possible I just didn't give the story enough time to "get good", and that would be a fair criticism. I can see how some readers would love something like this, but I'm not sure that it's for me.

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I really enjoyed reading this story despite the not so interesting title. However, the detail description are still lacking but can easily improved. This will help to convey the message the author wanted to convey. Better still the xx scene could be complimented with pictures Nonetheless, the characters are interesting and the plot are not so stereotype hence why i am still reading. Moreover i was hoping that since the novel is no longer free, the chapters should be longer to commentsurate the number of power stones payable for each chapter