Just started reading this novel and I'm a huge fan. The pacing is nice and the author doesnt waste an abundance of time on reptative or unnecessary explanations. The story flows from one moment to the next quite well. A lot of great ideas so far and I'm really looking forward to what the author has in store for the future. Please continue to bless us with more chapters Mr author!!
Really enjoyed reading this, the writing had no issues and was enjoyable to read. The character development and story pace were just right. At times it did feel slow but I believe this was because of me reading so many trash fast-paced isekai novels that I started to think that was normal. So yeah, I recommend it and it's a shame the author is too busy to work on this novel. I hope one day he picks it up since it's really enjoyable to read.
The first 30-ish chapters were rather bland so I almost gave up on this, later on, it does start to rope you in especially after the system starts getting questioned. Overall, the grammar could be a bit better and the story itself a bit more polished but I cannot criticise it that much. It is by no means a masterpiece but it should provide everyone with an enjoyable read.
I'm going to start with my criticism. I feel characters aren't flesh out enough. now to the good stuff. this book slaps, it's an enjoyable read. what stands out to me is how the system is helping him deal with is emotions as it can affect him and what he needs to accomplish. I like the story, I dont know if there are others like it but this book is a new favourite
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