Jovia Ninnicabolla
I love the story, setting, and character development. The story plot is incredible and interesting. Arthur is a fantastic character in the story. His persona is well-defined and structured. The grammar, writing style, and dialogues are perfectly flourished. Highly recommended!! Can't wait to read more. keep up the good work, author!!
A good start... the premise is nice with the impression that Arthur( the MC) is op and all, but could do nothing due to some reasons. He has a lovely family with a sweet sister and something is definitely blooming between him and Myla. Well, the interactions can use some work, but overall a good story. Keep going.
this novel is excellent. The explanation is simple and easy to flow. It is filled with anxiety and eagerness to understand and get hooked on what's going to happen next. I like the mc and his character building. keep your story running and fly your words high for all the world to read. It's a great story and well built. keep going., keep writing
overall I like the concept of the story, but I can't get past the "am sorry" "am Arthur". to my knowledge no one talks like that, or atleast not in English language. also there are no idea of changing locations. I mean like nothing noting that the scene has changed until a name or something is mentioned. I didn't read past chaptor 3 because I couldn't stand the " am" thing, I keep thinking all the characters are mentally challenged. maybe later chaptors get better but I will never know. I started this because the reviews said high writing quality, which is false.