LargeFarva
Ur other bk is amazing, this so far is also amazing. so here have the stars. An SI as a nephew of tywin rather than his son or bastard....nice. I love the interactions between tywin and MC, more would be nice. And reading C5, u might;ve more or less captured his personality. rare in an FF also nice. PLus, i decent eng and grammar is another plus I suppose. **: tyrion,,,be friends...damn man, this dude has a sad life. also he is smart and useful. same with hound, also ...... *Roman tactics and ships and toilets and sewage *soap and glass and also teach to make plows and weapons and **** *basic hygiene *farming and crop rotation *make MC a seer and warg? use ants and crows to spy? and I;ll ask the same thing I ask all GOT FF writers, if theres romance, dont make it sad, dont make the chick useless slut/princess....make her useful. ---anyway, like ur other ****, and this **** too...dont drop. GL
This is a He** of a story!!!!!!!!!!!!!! πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
pathetic mc, overrated. Even though he is a marine he doesn't have the spine to look Tywin in the eyes, his death is also for convinience he has no reason to drive while being sleepy.He doesn't even have control of his own thought he is slipping his thoghts out loud. what are you? middle schoolar angry to his mother and slips some profanity ?
Finally a good Lannister Fic where author isnt a Stark or Dragon Gobbler, in this he's protecting he's family people always make Lannister to be some evil family when in reality every family in Westeros is equally scummy so I enjoy it and honestly I don't mind Myrcella as he's Fiancee so all in all a fun read that doesnt worship starks like all others lol starks the dumbest family is what I like to call them.
I came here from Spacebattles, I like the way the story is going and SI!Lancel has a pair on him. I'm sort of concerned with him assuming stuff but the story so far has been reasonable and some what plausible. Mind you I have never watched the show or read the books. Everything I know of Game of Thrones comes from the many Fanfictions I have read over the course of the past few years. So for me I like how the author is willing to describe the scenes so I can imagine it and a quick google search is more than enough to satisfy my curiosity on the approximate appearances of the characters. I'm interested to see where this goes. I expect that the author will do well for himself. I hope he does well and that the story continues until it's completion. Thank you for the hard work. Also, I highly recommend this to most people interested in reading a Game of Thrones fanfic. Thanks for reading the review.